(5年高考3年模拟A版)浙江省2020年高考英语总复习专题十七概要写作教师用书(含解析)

专题十七 概要写作

挖命题 【考情探究】

考情分析 考点 考查内容 考查方式 2018.11 1.对原文主旨及要点的理解和呈现情况;2.概括要点时语概要写作 准确性;3.概要文章上下文的连贯性;4.对各要点表达的独立性情况 分析解读 概要写作是综合性的写作考查。要求考生首先对原文有准确的理解、对原文的结构和要点有准确的把握,然后再用高级的语法结构及合适的连接词写出包含所有要点的短文。所以,考生要想做好本题,就必须注意以下几点:(1)准确理解文章。(2)把握文章的各个要点。(3)使用准确的语法结构、丰富的词汇和合适的连接词。(4)使用自己的语言表述,不要照抄原文中的句子。

【真题典例】

提供一篇350词以内的法结构和词汇应用的短文,要求考生基于该在申请大学之前,最好亲自去目标学 2018.6 2017.11 2017.6 2016.10 校看一下。如果时短文写出一篇60词左右间和金钱不允许,的内容概要 就在网上获取信息

阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

It’s a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their websites can all start to look and sound the same. Nothing will give you the sense of what it will actually be like to live on a college campus(校园)like visiting and seeing for yourself the dorms, classrooms and athletic equipment and, of course, the students. It seems a little crazy once senior year hits to find the time to visit college campuses, and it can also be pricey if the schools you are applying to happen to be more than a car ride away. But keep in mind that you are making a decision about the next four years of your life, and do all the research you can to make

概要写作的文章一般都是说明文或议论文。文章结构比较清楚,段落之间的逻辑关系也很紧密。

文章第一段开门见山,提出观点:在你申请大学之前,要去亲自看看目标大学。

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sure you are making the right one.

There’s no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area. In fact, 第二段特别指出一定要去a lot of college applications even ask if you have visited campus, and 看看附近的大学。 obviously, if you live across the country that won’t be as much of a possibility, but if you live nearby, go check it out!

If campus visits aren’t going to happen before you apply, at the very least you should find some time between applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the schools you’d like to attend. It can save you a lot of heartache if you rule out now the things that you don’t like about certain campuses, things that you wouldn’t know unless you actually visit.

第三段的内容是,如果你在申请之前没有去过;在申请之后,或得到offer之前,一定要去看看,免得将来后悔。

Now, if time and money are making it impossible, then check out the online 第四段的主要内容是如果college fairs at CollegeWeekLive. It’s a chance to chat online with 无法亲自去参观的话,可admissions officers, students, and college counselors(顾问), and it collegeweeklive.com. While visiting an online college fair can’t take the place of an actual campus visit, it can be a very useful tool that along with all your other research will help you make an informed decision about which colleges or universities you’d like to attend.

参考范文

范文鉴赏

It is a wise choice for you to pay a personal visit to the college you are applying to,especially the ones that are close to you.(要点1)In order to avoid being regretful, you should at least visit the college you decided to attend.(要点2)If all the above is not affordable, it will be helpful to search the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive where you can get the necessary information(要点3).

1.范文准确地把握了各个段落的要点。

2.各个要点之间的连接和逻辑都很顺畅,相互关系密切。

3.句子之间用了比较好的连接方式。如第一句的especially;第二句的In order to,第三句的If。

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以登录网站了解相关的信

won’t cost you a penny! You can register for its online college fair at 息。并提供了网站的信息。

4.文章使用了比较高级的词汇和结构。如,It is a wise choice;you are applying to;that are close to you;avoid being regretful;not affordable;where you can get the necessary information。

【三年模拟】 模拟题组

Writing 1(2019浙江五校)

阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

These days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rush. It appears that people have got used to being in a hurry. However, it’s better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done.

The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrong in a rush. When people do their jobs or take action in a hurry, they can’t make a sound decision and probably regret later. As the saying goes, “Haste makes waste.” We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quickly. We should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly.

Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better. For example, taking a train to some place certainly will take more time than taking a plane. However, taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends. Besides, it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way. On the contrary, being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives.

Finally, slower life pace provides better health conditions for us. As is known to all, taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stress. People think if they are not in a hurry, they will become a loser and that annoys them. But being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentally. According to some studies, people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases, tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense, even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter.

In short, working quickly will bring about more material benefits to make our society more advanced. Yet, much stress can’t bring enjoyment, friends and health, which are much more important than money and other material advantages. Therefore, take your time and live your life at a slower pace.

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答案 【写作提示】

本文是一篇议论文。文章论述了降低生活节奏的各种好处。文章结构清楚,观点明确。同时在第一段提出了主旨,第二至第四段进行了论述,最后一段给予了总结。 【参考范文】

Despite being accustomed to the fast pace in modern society, people are recommended to lead a slower life.(要点1)Slowing down lowers the possibility of committing errors made by hurry decisions.(要点2)It can also provide us with more opportunities to enjoy life.(要点3)Besides, a slower life is supposed to bring better health condition physically and mentally.(要点4)Therefore, a slow life is strongly suggested.(要点5) Writing 2(2019浙江宁波返校考)

阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Have you heard an old saying “The grass looks greener on the other side of the fence”?It means other places often look better, more interesting than the place where you live. “Let’s go to KFC for dinner and then watch some Japanese cartoons!” We all know it:more and more Chinese kids love American and Japanese food and movies. Some people worry that young Chinese are beginning to feel that way. They see young Chinese ignoring(忽视)Chinese culture and, instead, buying Japanese cartoon books, watching Korean soap operas and even celebrating western holidays.

Foreign books and soap operas are good, but Chinese writers and actors are just as good. As for holidays, Christmas is nice, but it can never have the meaning for Chinese that Spring Festival has, and the West has nothing to compare with the Mid-Autumn Festival. China has lots of cool things in its culture:calligraphy, Beijing Opera, quick meals on the streets, and even Jay Chou! And let’s not forget

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