湖北省宜昌市金东方高级中学2015-2016学年高二英语9月月考试题

五：短文改错

I had an unusual experience today. In the morning, I was walking along a street while I saw

when a lady knocked down by ∧truck. But the driver just drove away. Without some hesitation, I

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rushed across the street to help her. I put her on my back and carry her to a hospital nearby. On

carried

reaching at the hospital, however, she started to accuse me of knocking her down and demanded arriving 或去at

I paid for the hospital bills. That really surprised me !Although I managed to explain, she

pay tried

insisted that I was the very person whom was responsible for the accident! I was total puzzled.

who totally Is it right or wrong to help others people? What should I do next time? other

六：书面表达

One possible version:

Last week, our class had a heated discussion about “Which is more important, health or appearance?. Our opinions are divided.

Some of us hold the opinion that appearance is more important than health. As is known to all, good appearance makes a person more attractive, which will help make more friends. Besides, it will be much easier for one to find a good job if he has good appearance, because people usually pay more attention to appearance.

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However, others insist that health is more important than appearance. People usually feel energetic if they are healthy. And this will cause them to work and study more efficiently. In addition, people with good health are less likely to suffer illness, adding no extra burden to their family. So it’s of great importance to stay healthy.

As far as I’m concerned, health matters more than appearance in our life. We can’t do anything well without good health. It also does good to our family if we’re all healthy. Only with good health can we work and study better. 【解析】

试题分析：分析要求可知，短文必须将“健康和外貌，哪个更重要？”这个主题辩论阐述出来，属于议论文。短文应该主要用一般现在时，可以分成四小段来写，第一段引出主题，第二段从正方来写，第三段从反方写，最后写自己的观点。另外，还应该尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。

【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：As is known to all，Besides，However，efficiently，In addition，be likely to，As far as I’m concerned，Only with good health can we work and study better.等都很不错。

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