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2019-2020年外研版高中英语必修二讲义：Module+2+2.4及答案

Section Ⅳ Writing — 如何回复电子邮件

[写作任务]

假定你是李华，来自美国的笔友Peter给你写了一封电子邮件。请根据邮件内容给他写一封回信，表明你的观点并说明理由。

Dear Li Hua，

Long time no see you. How are you?

A new law has been passed in my city. Smoking has been banned in all public places. I think it is a wise decision. Do you think so?

Yours， Peter

注意：1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter，

I'm pleased to receive your email.__________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________

Best wishes， Li Hua

[写作指导] 一、审题定调

该写作要求考生回复一封电子邮件，表达对公共场合实施禁烟令的看法。

电子邮件主要由称呼、正文和落款构成。本写作开头和落款已给出，故考生只需写正文部分。

二、谋篇布局

根据所给提示，我们可以将正文分为三部分： 第一部分：表明观点(赞成公共场合禁烟方案)；

第二部分：说明理由(易导致疾病、影响他人健康、污染空气、易引发火灾)；

第三部分：总结全文(避免在公共场合吸烟)。

常用表达

I'm more than pleased to have received your letter. I learned from your letter that...

Knowing that you are interested in...，

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2019-2020年外研版高中英语必修二讲义：Module+2+2.4及答案

I'm writing to share my opinions with you. In your letter you asked me why... Different people hold/have different opinions. People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards... ...of them are in favor of the idea that... Some people believe that...; others argue that... About 20% of the students surveyed said... As far as I am concerned, we should... If you need further information, please don't hesitate to contact me. You can call me at...or e-mail me. 三、组织语言 第一部分：表明观点(赞成公共场合禁烟方案)。 普通表达 高级表达 ·As for banning smoking in public, I approve of (赞成) the law. ·I strongly support the government's decision to ban smoking in public. ·Regarding smoking in public, I am strongly in favor of banning it. 第二部分：说明理由(易导致疾病、影响他人健康、污染空气、易引发火灾)。 普通表达 高级表达 ·Smoking is a dangerous habit that ·Smoking is a bad habit and very does harm to not only the smoker, harmful to people's health. but also those around him or her. ·It makes it easier for smokers to ·It increases the possibility/chances get various diseases. of getting deadly diseases. ·At the same time, secondhand ·It could put you in danger of/at risk smoke can also badly affect other of getting various deadly diseases. people's health, especially babies'. ·Secondhand smoke can lead to ·Cigarette smoke can pollute the air serious damage to non-smokers. inside a building and stay there for a ·Cigarette smoke can stay for a long long time, which stops people from time in a building, making it hard breathing freely. for people there to breathe. ·Smoking may also cause a fire and ·Smoking may lead to a fire and result in great loss. bring about great loss. 第三部分：总结全文(避免在公共场合吸烟)。 普通表达 高级表达 Everyone should control the desire We should avoid smoking in public (欲望) to smoke in public for the and create a green environment good of all people's health and our together. environment. 【范文展示】 2 / 4

2019-2020年外研版高中英语必修二讲义：Module+2+2.4及答案

普通范文

Dear Peter，

I'm pleased to receive your email. I strongly support the government's decision to ban smoking in public.

Smoking is a bad habit and very harmful to people's health. It makes it easier for smokers to get various diseases. At the same time, secondhand smoke can also badly affect other people's health, especially babies'. Cigarette smoke can pollute the air inside a building and stay there for a long time, which stops people from breathing freely. What's more, smoking may cause a fire and result in great loss.

In a word, we should avoid smoking in public and create a green environment together.

Best wishes，

Li Hua

高级范文

Dear Peter，

I'm pleased to receive your email. As for banning smoking in public, I approve of the law.

Smoking is a dangerous habit that does harm to not only the smoker, but also those around him or her. It increases the chances of getting deadly diseases. Meanwhile, secondhand smoke can lead to serious damage to non-smokers. Cigarette smoke can stay for a long time in a

building, making it hard for people there to breathe. What's worse, smoking may lead to a fire and bring about great loss.

In a nutshell, everyone should control the desire to smoke in public for the good of all people's health and our environment.

Best wishes, Li Hua

实战演练

假定你是李华，以下是你的外国笔友David发给你的电子邮件。请你根据邮件内容给他回一封电子邮件。

Dear Li Hua，

Long time no see you. How are you?

Last month, my roommate offered me a cigarette. First I refused but in the end I couldn't control myself and smoked it. It made me feel relaxed. Now I smoke five to six cigarettes a day.

It seems that I've become addicted to tobacco. What should I do?

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Yours， David

注意：1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear David，

_____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________

Yours， Li Hua

One possible version： Dear David，

I'm so sorry to learn that you have begun to smoke. I hope you can give it up.

First, it's generally known that smoking is a bad habit. It not only makes others uncomfortable, but also puts people around you in great danger of deadly diseases. More importantly, smoking has a bad effect on your health. It can make you so addicted that you cannot live without tobacco. In other words, smoking is damaging your health.

Hopefully, you can take my advice into consideration and break away from this bad habit.

Yours， Li Hua

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