【英语】中考英语试题真题分类汇编英语英语书面表达汇编

【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我们决定去爬山，接下来介绍我们在山顶上发现垃圾，然后捡拾垃圾，最后表达我们的感受。此处set off, get to, pick up, put...into…等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

13．（·湖北中考模拟）书面表达

幸福是什么呢?是父母细心的呵护，是成功时朋友的祝福，是帮助他人后会心的一笑，还是……？其实幸福很简单，幸福就在你身边。请你以“Happiness”为题，写一篇英语短文，让我们分享你的感受。词数：不少于80。

温馨提示：l、短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。

2、这些词汇也许对你有帮助：treasure（v. 珍惜），comfort （v．安慰），share （v．分享） Happiness

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Happiness

Dad has been away from our city since he found a job in Guangzhou years ago. He seldom comes back home except Spring Festivals. I stay with Mom and Grandma in the countryside. They care for me a lot. When I meet something difficult, I prefer to talk with Dad on the phone. Grandma also enjoys our chatting online. No matter where Dad is, my family is always full of happiness. How I wish next S pring Festival would come soon so that the whole family can get together! 【解析】

话题作文写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。

14．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达 Hey Li Ming,

I will move to your community and stay for two months. I want to know something about your community. What is your community like? What activities do you usually have? How can I get along with your neighbors? Write soon!

Yours, Ben

假如你是Li Ming，请用英语给笔友Ben回复邮件。 注意：

1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3.词数80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Ben,

I’m very glad to know that you will come to our community. Yours, Li Ming

【答案】Dear Ben,

I’ m very glad to know that you will come to our community. My community is in the northern part of the city. It’s not a big one, but it’s quite beautiful. You can see a garden with different flowers when entering it. You can breathe fresh air every morning because of many trees in it. Besides, we also have different activities. For example, people in Helping Hand Club always do some shopping for the old who live alone. Every weekend, college students always help us with our homework.

All the people in our community are kind and easy to get on with. You’d better say “Hello” to greet them. If you bump into someone, it will be polite to say “sorry”. That’s all about our community. I hope you will have a good time here. Yours, Li Ming

【解析】试题分析：本文是要求写一封电子邮件，写作时注意要写信的格式。假如你是Li Ming，请用英语给笔友Ben回复邮件。动笔前要认真阅读电子邮件，写作时需回答邮件内所提问题，可适当发挥。仔细阅读本的电子邮件，找出他的问题（我想了解一下你们社区的情况。你的社区是什么样的？你通常有什么活动？我怎样和你的邻居相处？），然后根据问题做出回答。根据内容可知本文主要时态是一般现在时。写作时，列好提纲，注意使用连词，句型、句式，使文章整体意思连贯，表达流畅。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写，语法错误（时态，主谓一致等）。（一）列提纲：1. 社区是什么样的in the northern part of the city/ big but quite beautiful/ a garden with different flowers. 2. 活动do some shopping for the old who live alone/ college students always help us with our homework.3. 怎样和邻居相处kind and easy to get on with./“Hello” to greet them. /If you bump into someone, it will be polite to say “sorry”.（二）根据提纲连词成句，然后连句成篇，注意连词的使用。（三）写完以后，在阅读一遍，检查单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，大小写，标点符号，主谓一致等是否有错误。

点睛：这是一篇比较优秀的作文，语言表达要符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。（2）注意给出的起始句（这就给出了时态），学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型。（3）列

好提纲和要点，及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用。 （5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等。

15．（·江苏中考模拟）假如你叫Sandy，你收到了你的英文笔友Lucy的来信。请你用英文给她写一封回信，针对她的问题，谈谈你的看法，并给出可行的建议。

Dear Sandy,

I am very glad to enter my school. I enjoy the life here except for the school lunch. I prefer hamburgers,ice creams and potato chips,but we are not allowed to order them according to the school rules. I usually have little for lunch and I often feel tired and can't follow the teachers in the afternoon classes. What should I do? Do you have any good ideas? Please write to me as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Lucy

注意事项:1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数; 2.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Lucy,

I am glad to receive your letter. Yours, Sandy

【答案】Dear Lucy,

I am glad to receive your letter. I can understand your feeling and I'm worried about your health and your study. Here are some suggestions for you.

First, hamburgers, ice creams and potato chips are bad for your health, so you had better give up the thought that you want to eat them at school. Second, try to eat as much school lunch as possible in order to have enough energy. Try your best and everything will be all right soon. Finally, if there is really something wrong with the school lunch, you can talk to your teachers and help improve it. It's not only for yourself, but also for the whole school. Good luck. Yours, Sandy

【解析】本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

点睛：这封信使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如；be worried about；be bad fo as ··· as possible ;Try one’s best； in order to； not only··· but also···等；First；Second, Finally,等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。

16．（·全国中考模拟）每位同学都希望成为班级中受欢迎的人。请你根据下表所提供的信息,写一篇题为“Being a Popular Student”的英语短文,谈谈你是如何做的。 对待集体 对待他人 对待自己 积极参加各项活动, 注重细节, 工作高标准,…… 尊重老师、与同学相处融洽, 为别人保守秘密, …… 严于律已，努力学习，不轻易放弃，谦虚有礼……

要求：

1．词数100左右。开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2．所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。 3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 Being a Popular Student

We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers.

All in all, popularity among classmates and teachers comes to those who keep improving their personal qualities.

【答案】We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. I think I can take an active part in all kinds of activities. It’s necessary to pay attention to every detail, because a miss is as good as a mile. I’m so well organized that I always work to high standard.

I think I should respect our teachers, it’s also important to get along well with my classmates. What’s more, I always help others when they are in trouble. I not only （would） keep secrets for others but also never say bad words about others.

I’m always strict with myself in everything. I always try my best to study, I never give up easily. I’m modest and easy to work with. I often help my classmates who has trouble in studying. All in all, popularity among classmates and teachers comes to those who keep improving their personal qualities.