2020版英语高分突破二轮复习限时规范训练(二十九) 写作板块——练规范

限时规范训练(二十九) 写作板块——练规范

(满分35分，限时30分钟)

Ⅰ.短文改错(10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

After school today, I took a walk in the park, depressing and down. I have made considerable efforts win the talent contest, but I only finished fourth. Just while I was crying, a boy in glasses walked by. He noticed me and came over. He played me a piece of Beethoven's symphony with his mobile phone. Beside, he said Beethoven wrote it as his hearing grew worse. Hearing his word, I was no longer in tears. I came to realize that if we put all our efforts into that we loved, we could create great things no matter what obstacles were in the front of us. I was true thankful for their encouragement.

答案：

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Ⅱ.书面表达(25分)

假定你是李华，下周三美国Greendale高中的访问团将来你校参观交流，作为校学生会主席，请给对方联系人Elizabeth写一封邮件，询问对方相关事宜。内容包括：

1．日程安排； 2．饮食习惯； 3．其他要求。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Elizabeth，

________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

[参考范文] Dear_Elizabeth，

I'm the president of the student union of our school. We are so glad that your group from Greendale High School will come for a visit.

I have some questions to ask you before your arrival so that we could make your visit go smoothly. First，could you please share your schedule of the visit? So we can get prepared for it accordingly. Next, we will offer both Chinese and American food during your visit. So please let us know if there is something that any of you are allergic to. Finally, please let us know other special requests you might have.

We look forward to meeting you next Wednesday.

Yours_sincerely，

Li_Hua