高三书面表达周练11

泸县九中高2013级书面表达周练11

——高分招法讲练

英语书面表达在高考中日益重要，我们不但要在高考书面表达中把

话说清楚，把意思表达完整，得到好分数而且要把高考书面表达当作一件艺术品，利用词汇手段和技巧打造精美，得到最高分。很多人都强调用迅速提高语言水平。但这种方法需要一定的积累，也需要一定的基础。本周的书面表达周练为大家介绍书面表达高分招法，希望同学们注意积累高级词汇手段，认真训练高分技能，在高考书面表达中勇得高分。

【招法展示】 利用较丰富的句式和高级词汇, 能增加文章的文采。

◆ It句型

① It will be + some time + before? It won’t be long before humans visit the Mars. ② It is + adj./n.+ for sb to do sth.

It is very important for us to learn computer well, because it has changed our life so much.

He said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.（2008年湖北卷）

③ It is + 被强调部分 + that?

It is what Yang Liwei has done that encourages us a lot.

Those who like reading extensively say it is through reading that we get our knowledge. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.

◆ 倒装句

The library is to the east of the teaching building. →East of the teaching building is the library. Although we are tired, we are happy. →Tired as we are, we are happy.

Only in this way can he grow to be a useful man. (2002 上海卷)

May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe! Both Mary and Lucy can speak Chinese. →Mary can speak Chinese, and so can Lucy. Only in this way can you solve this problem.

◆ 分词结构

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Hearing this, a few people began to run after him.（2004 辽宁卷）

Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor.（08湖南卷） She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. →Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.

→Singing and laughing, they went back to school. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street Walking towards the cinema, he met a foreigner

◆ with结构

A terrible accident happened yesterday, with nine people killed and almost eighty injured. He was carrying a bedroll and a large bag on his shoulder, with a large suitcase in his left hand. With the sun setting in the west, we had to wave goodbye to the workers.

With his help, we've learned how to analyze and settle problems.（2006年湖南卷）

With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want.（2009年江苏卷）

◆（非限制性）定语从句

The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street. It is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.

→The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. It was quite an experience for us both, which I’ll never forget for the rest of my life. In my opinion, Internet cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information.

◆ 名词从句

It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk. My hometown is no longer what it used to be. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.

→What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. That’s what I should do.

We should do a favor to whoever needs help at present.

◆ 各种状语从句

I won’t believe what he says. （no matter what状语从句） →No matter what he says, I won’t believe.

When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (the more…the more) →The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. Time passed quickly before we knew it.

The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting.

So long as we work harder at our lessons, we’ll catch up sooner or later.

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◆ 祈使句+and….

If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. →Study hard and you’ll make rapid progress.

◆ 省略句

They read while (they were) walking or riding on a bus. Even though (I am) invited, I will not go to the party.

◆ 被动语态

Opinions are divided on the question. (NMET 2002)

All classes are taught by teachers with rich experience in teaching foreign students.

New factories, houses and roads have been built.(2004 江苏卷)

◆ 巧妙的改写 （1）．Only 改成no one but

Only Tom passed the exam last week. → No one but Tom passed the exam.

（2）．as soon as ?改成No sooner?than?/Hardly?when?/Immediately?/The moment

No sooner had we arrived at the cinema than the film started. （3）．have sb/sth do/done

The girl was knocked off her bicycle and had her leg broken (her leg was broken.).

（4）．变换插入语的位置

① However, they suggest fees should be charged low. → They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. (NMET 2002)

② I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. →

This is a good chance for you, I think, to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. (2004 全国卷Ⅰ)

(5). 用同位语代替非限制性定语从句

Meimei, who is seven years old, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.→ Meimei, a girl of thirteen, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.

Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world.（2008年湖南卷）

（6）短语代替单词

As a result, the plan was a failure. (turn out)

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→The plan turned out to be a failure. →It turned out that the plan was a failure.

（7）比较级代替最高级

Among courses, spoken English is more popular than any one else/any of the others/any other course.

【一招一试】 A.学会运用句型变换

1. 强调句：可以轻松地将时间、地点、原因、方式等类型的状语从句转变为强调句。

I didn’t realize I had left the bag on the shop counter until I arrived home. =

2倒装句：只要句中有介词短语或状语从句，便可将其提前，变成倒装句。

He can escape from the big fire only by this means =

3. with引导的伴随结构：可以将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成with结构。 I went to school in high spirits. the sun lighted brightly and the birds song cheerfully. =

4. 恰到好处的被动句：适合没有合适的主语或强调话题。 有人建议城市里应多种些树。

除了茶和咖啡，我们也提供中西餐。

这种现象值得关注。

我们要求学校给予学生更多的业余时间来锻炼身体。

5．感叹句：通常用于开头结尾活跃文章气氛，凡是“I feel ……”之类表达感情的句子皆可如此改造。

I felt terrible today! I failed again in the math exam. =

6. 以动代静增添活力

In my hometown there is a river. =

7. 数词+名词”变为“as many as+数词+名词”。

Ten years ago, my hometown used to be covered by forests. =

8．恰当使用介词，使语言简洁地道，“洋”味十足。 (1) China is a great country. It has a history of 4000years. =

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