湖北省孝感市2017-2019年三年中考英语试卷分类汇编：书面表达含解析

书面表达

2019

八、书面表达（15分）

随着年龄的增长，你周围的事物也发生了很大变化。请根据以下提示，以“Great changes around me”

为题，写一篇短文。

写作要点：1. 过去, 道路狭窄(narrow), 房展老旧, 空气…河水…

2.现在。路面洁净、宽阔, 交通便利；高楼林立；蓝天白云, 满城绿树鲜花, 小

鸟歌唱；人们…

3.感受, …

写作要求：1.要点齐全, 省略号处须作适当发挥, 但不要逐句翻译； 2. 语句连贯, 条理清晰, 详略得当, 书写工整；

3文中不得出现任何宾实的信息（地名、校名和人名等）； 4.100词左右, 短文的翅目和开头已给出, 不计入总词数。

Great Changes around Me

In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me.

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Great Changes around Me

in the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. The roads used to be narrow and crowded. The houses were old and small. The air wasn't fresh enough. Sometimes, there was terrible smell. The river was polluted badly and there was rubbish in it.

Nowadays, the roads are wide and clean. It's really convenient for people to go out. We can choose

different kinds of transportation to go anywhere. Lots of tall buildings have been built in the city. Most of us have moved to big beautiful houses. The sky is blue and the cloud is white .The birds are singing happily. My hometown looks like a big garden with green trees, grass and colorful flowers.

Our country is rich and strong, we are living a happy life. I'm sure as time goes on, our life will become better and better!

2018

61. 书面表达

本周一是端午节，你校外教Tony对中国文化很感兴趣，你陪他去槐荫公园观看了龙舟比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇日记。 写作要点：

1.现场情况。人多拥挤，16支龙舟队竞争激烈，人们欢呼，队员们闭队合作，最终“勇气队”获胜。 2.赛后活动：我给Tony介绍端午节，下午带他参加有关端午节的其它活动，如…… 3.感想：Tony……，我…… 写作要求：

1.短文内容必须包括所有要点、语句通顺，条理清晰； 2.省略号处须作适当发挥(1-2句即可)；

3.100词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 June 18th

Today is the Dragon Boat Festival. 【答案】Today is the Dragon Boat Festival For the reason that Tony has a strong interest in Chinese traditional culture. I invited him to come to watch the dragon boat races which was held in Huaiyin Park this morning When we arrived, it was crowded. There were 16 colorful dragon boats floating in the river. During the race, the dragon boat teams competed with each other, while people on each bank cheered up. Both Tony and I felt the exciting atmosphere. At last, the Courage Team won.

After the competition, I introduced the Dragon Boat Festival to Tony and welcomed him to many other activities about the festival. We went to learn how to make zongzi and admire a picture exhibition.

At the end of the day, tired as we were, we felt excited. Tony though our traditional Chinese culture was so amazing and I am proud of my great motherland.

【解析】

【详解】试题分析：本书面表达以“端午节”为话题的日记。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般过去时态，用第一人称来表达。注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练、要点齐全。文中invite sb.to do, during the race, compete with, cheere up, at last, both…and…; at the end of the day, be proud of等词汇的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如：运用了there be句型；定语从句、宾语从句、时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。

2017

十一、XI．书面表达（共15分）

80．假如你是某校九年级（1）班的学生，你校正在举行\的评选活动，请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的同学李明，以供参评．内容要点如下： 1．个子高，性格外向，为人友善； 2．学习认真，成绩优秀； 3．爱好广泛，擅长踢足球； 4．乐于助人，…；

5．得到高度赞扬，我们以他为荣． 写作要求：

1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．第4要点的省略号部分，需作适当发挥（2﹣3句话即可）； 3．词数在90个左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数．

I'm glad to hear the news that\．I think Li Ming is the hot favorite for the award． 【考点】S2：提纲作文． 【分析】【高分句型一】

That's why he has a lot of friends那是为什么他有很多的朋友的原因． why引导的表语从句，和is构成系表结构． 【高分句型二】

He sets a good example to us all and we are proud of him他给我们做了好榜样我们感到自豪． set a good example树立了好榜样． be proud of…以…为自豪

I think Li Ming is the hot 【解答】I'm glad to hear the news that\．favorite for the award．

Li Ming is a tall boy of wide interests，especially good at playing football．He is outgoing and always friendly to others．That's why he has a lot of friendsLi Ming studies 【高分句型一】（个子高，性格外向，为人友善；）．hard and of course is one of the top students at school（学习认真，成绩优秀；）．Besides，he takes an active part in different kinds of activities．He is good at soccer ball．（爱好广泛，擅长踢足球） Li Ming is helpful．He always gives his seat to someone on the bus．（乐于助人）

His actions have won high praise from our school．He sets a good example to us all and we are proud of him．（得到高度赞扬，我们以他为荣）【高分句型二】