英语四级写作

范例(those who...) those who have made remarkable achievements in sports/business/political world/ are generally adj.... With this spirit/the sense of.../Under the influence of..., they ....overcome the

challenges(make/achieve a success in their careers; obtain/attain happiness) 练习：

中间部分的完整部分套写： weibo, 社交网络流行原因的分析：

Without a shadow of doubt, it is not challenging or complicated to figure out that some essential factors are responsible for the popularity of

“weibo” discussed above. Initially, a multitude of users are able to afford the cost on surfing online through their smart phones or personal computers, because they are much better off than people in the past. Plus, the technological innovation in digital and cyber field cultivates consumers’ habits in using weibo or other social networks. 77

4 结尾段落

结论式结尾(针对影响、意义类的中间主体论证) A.

好： In a nutshell/To sum up/To draw a conclusion /As indicated above/In light of the facts outlined above,...话题对象is exceedingly/extraordinarily/particularly beneficial to both society and people/environment/education. be beneficial both individually and collectively

be beneficial: make good contribution to; bring about benefits to..., lend great benefits to…, be of great benefits, be of great value, be of great interests.

举例：博物馆免费

In a nutshell, free admission to museums is exceedingly beneficial to both the personal intellectual level and the overall/mutual cultural communication. 21

In a nutshell, free admission to museums is of great value both individually and collectively. 15

In a nutshell, free admission to museums has made great contribution, both individually and collectively. 15

坏： To sum up, …主题…is exceedingly detrimental to ..sth/对象. + 同义替换

detrimental: make bad contribution to, be of little value, be of little interests, lend great drawbacks/flaws to, be to the detriment of…

举例：使用一次性塑料袋

In a nutshell, too much use of disposable plastic bags is exceedingly detrimental to the environmental protection/conservation. It will make bad contribution to the sustainable environmental development. 27

不好不坏：(科技类)

In a word, no one／hardly anyone can make/draw upon a clear/justified/objective judgment in the potential

(risk)/imminent/upcoming/existent impacts of ..主题. Therefore, ..主题.is really a double-edged sword.

举例：限制购买私家车

In a nutshell, hardly anyone can make a clear judgment in the potential impact of restricting the personal purchase of private cars. Therefore, to restrict the number of buying private cars is really/virtually/basically a double-edged sword. 36

B.建议式结尾(针对原因类的主体论证)

To address this issue effectively/satisfyingly, some prudent measures are supposed to be available and practical./valid and valuable./effective and efficient . … 建议实施的主体+具体建议的动作...(It is suggested that the government/the general public should…) Prudent: careful, well-considered

Measures: strategies, approaches, means, solutions The best solution is to suggest … doing … …suggest that …should … …suggest that …do/does/is/are… …suggest sb doing something 建议类对象和动词： 主体对象： government 当局 authorities

政府机构 government agencies/divisions concerned 各级政府 governments at different levels 媒体对象：

媒体行业 media industry 媒体炒作 media hype 媒体机构 media organization 新闻制作单位 news agencies 狗仔队paparazzi

动作： monitor, supervise, uncover, regulate, give an objective/just/

exaggerated/sensationalized/dramatized account of 监，管 make an effective supervision make an effective regulation give an objective/just…account/ coverage/orientation

The government agencies and media organization are suggested making the most effective/satisfying/satisfactory/efficient regulation and supervision.

The news agencies should assume their responsibilities to give all the citizens an objective and just coverage of what is happening around. 对象：

民众：the general public， citizen, netizen, grassroot, 动作：

increase their awareness of ..N/doing.; avoid insensitivity of ...; actively participate in....

Eg: The general public should increase their environmentally-friendly awareness and actively participate in environmentally-friendly activities. It is highly suggested that the general public should…..

公共利益 public interests/benefits/welfare 公共活动 community service, public activity 公益活动 charitable activities