高中英语Unit5MusicSectionWriting - 如何写一封求助信教案（含解析）新人教版必修2

Section Ⅴ Writing——如何写一封求助信

技法指导 1.文体特点

求助信是写信人向收信人寻求帮助或建议的信件。写信时，要写出写信的原因、背景，言明自己所遇到的具体的问题。文章要脉络清晰，条理清楚，有较强的层次感。语言要简明扼要、目的明确。

2．亮点句式

(1)I'm writing to ask for your help/advice on health. 我写信是为了请教健康方面的建议。

(2)I have got a problem and I need to ask for your help. 我遇到了难题，需要向你求助。

(3)I have some difficulties in getting along with my classmates.我在与同学相处方面有困难。

(4)Would you be so kind to tell me how to solve the problem? 你能告诉我如何解决这个问题吗？

(5)I am unable to remember words well and feel tired of learning English.我记不住单词，感觉讨厌学英语。

(6)I believe I can make great progress in English with your help.我相信在你的帮助下，我的英语会取得很大的进步。

3．高分模板 Dear XX，

(首段)My name is ________.I'm writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met with many difficulties in ________.

(中段)Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to introduce to me some good ways to ________ so that I can ________？ In the meanwhile, I beg you to teach ________ so that ________.Also, I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to ________. I'm sure that I can make great progress in ________ with your help.

(尾段)I would be grateful/thankful if you could give me some advice/help.

Yours， XXX

典题演练

小伟减肥以后，感到身体疲倦、虚弱，不知如何是好，于是他写了一封电子邮件向健康

专家请教。请根据下面内容，以小伟的名义写一封邮件。词数100个左右。

原因：觉得自己太胖，体重不断增加，担心形象不美，有同学骂他。 过程：

1．去健身房，两三次就放弃了，感觉太累也没时间； 2．节食，坚持了大约一个星期，经常饿得不能继续他的学习。 [谋篇]

[遣词]

1．向你寻求帮助 ask_for your help 2．增加体重 put_on_weight 3．外出锻炼 work_out 4．放弃 give_up 5．节食 go_on_a_diet [造句] 1．完成句子

(1)更为糟糕的是我体重一直在增加。

What's_worse，I am putting on weight all_the_time. (2)我非常担心我的体形和自己的样子。

I_am_very_worried_about my figure and how I look. (3)曾经，我试图节食。 Once I tried_going_on_a_diet. (4)但是不久我感到很疲惫，有时很虚弱。 But soon I felt_tired and weak sometimes. (5)因此，我不知道我应该做些什么。 Thus, I don't know what_I_should_do. 2．句式升级

(6)I even fear the thing. Some of my classmates call my names.(改写成宾语从句)

I even fear that some of my classmates call my names. (7)句型转换：

I felt too hungry to be able to continue my studies.

＝I felt so hungry that I was not able to continue my studies. [成篇]

_____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Health Expert，

I have got a problem and I need to ask for your help. I feel I am too fat. What's worse, I am putting on weight all the time. I am very worried about my figure and how I look. I even fear that some of my classmates call my names.

At one time, I tried to work out in a gym two or three times, but I finally gave up because I had no time for it and always felt very tired after doing exercise. Once I tried going on a diet. However, after about a week, I could not go on because I felt so hungry that I was not able to continue my studies.

Thus, I don't know what I should do. Could you be kind enough to give me some good advice?

Best wishes.

Yours， Xiaowei