现代大学英语 基础写作（课件） - 图文

?5.conciseness

--be brief

unnecessary words1) cut out unnecessary repetitionempty phrase2) use appropriate(合适的) language

?6.emphasis --emphasize your point

?coordination 并列结构?subordination 从属结构

?sentence ending 强调末尾?parallelism 平行结构

?active verb

?choosing the right subject

showing & telling

showing

Ways of telling a story

Dramatizea scene (片面,突出想强

调的)

telling

Summarizewhat happened

Create a dialogue (为中心服务)More vivid

Reader—experience the scene

directlyShort narrative = showing

Longer narrative = showing + telling

Include many eventsand details

Short historical narratives

a person’s life

?1.be brief account of

the history of a family

the establishment & development of an organization