2020版英语高分突破二轮复习限时规范训练(三十五) 写作板块——练规范

限时规范训练(三十五) 写作板块——练规范

(满分35分，限时30分钟)

Ⅰ.短文改错(10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last Saturday I had a trip to a new opened park called Guangfulin Relics Park. When I got there I found the environment was perfect and that there was various birds flying around. That attracted me most was the strange building. It looked like a flooding house, the roof of which was above the water, and indeed it's “body” was under the water. People could get there by going down the stair. In the building there was an exhibition which was very much great, for there were plenty architectural models and exhibits.

In a word, this park is a place worth visited again. 答案：

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visitingⅡ.书面表达(25分)

假定你是李华，外国交换生Tony想参加你校的社团活动以学习中国文化。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1．校社团情况介绍； 2．活动的时间、地点； 3．报名方法。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Dear Tony，

I'm glad to learn that you're interested in our school clubs. Here are the brief introductions. There are four clubs with the themes of Chinese culture for lovers of kung fu, cooking, paintings and handwriting in our school. Each club provides regular training courses. The clubs can not only enrich your knowledge of Chinese traditional culture, but also make your school life colorful and interesting. The activities start at 3：00 p．m.and last 1.5 hours every Friday in Teaching Building 1. If you are interested in any club above, just sign up on our school website before 18th, October. Welcome to join us.

Yours， Li Hua