2011版考研英语写作160篇的范文

2011版考研英语写作160篇的范文.txt∞-一人行,必会发情 二人行,必会激情 三人行,必有奸情 就不会被珍惜。真实的女孩不完美，完美的女孩不真实。得之坦然，失之淡然，顺其自然，争其必然。1.毅力与恒心 Directions：

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay， you should

1�眃escribe the drawing briefly，

2�眅xplain its intended meaning， and then 3�眊ive your comments.

You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. （20 points）

背诵范文及高分语言和结构点评

As we can see from the picture， a disabled young man is making efforts to climb a hill. By

the sweats all over his face， we may deduce that he may have a hard time before. But with his austere perseverance， he is close to his destination：the top of the hill.

However， the meaning of the picture goes beyond mountain climbing. ①�盧ather， it

proves that perseverance is a great element of success： those who persevere will win in the long

run because their silent power grows irresistibly greater with time. According to recent studies，

the quality many successful people share is persistence. They are willing to spend more time

accomplishing a task and to persevere in the face of many difficult odds. �雹贖elen Keller is a

proof that great things can happen to everyone， even though he or she may be handicapped， if

he or she works hard and never gives up. �雹跦elen was born blind and deaf. However， throughout all her life， she never lost her heart. Instead， she kept on learning how to read and

write and later became a very famous writer.

Whether you are strong or weak， you must keep fighting to succeed. ④�盢o matter who you are or what your position is， you must keep fighting for what you want to achieve. �雹�

Permanence， perseverance and persistence in spite of all obstacles， discouragements， and

impossibilities： it is this that in all things distinguishes the strong soul from the weak.

�雹佟凹岢帧钡牟煌�表示persist和persevere，

学习本文，应注意掌握“坚持”的相关单词的使用方法。在表示坚持做某事时，persist后加

in doing sth.而persevere的形式为persevere to do sth. ②�蔽闹斜硎尽安屑病钡牡ゴ视衐isabled和handicapped。

disabled主要是指肢体上的残疾而丧失某种能力，handicapped则表示生理上的缺陷和智力上

的不健全。在日常写作练习中应注意辨别其正确的用法。 �雹郾硎灸橙颂焐�就??的短语：sb. be born+adj；

文中的用法为Helen was born blind and deaf.这个句子还可以说成Helen was a born blind and

deaf person.此时born为形容词，应学会区分其不同点。

�雹躈o matter+who/ when/ where/ what/how的用法表示无论谁何时何处、什么、怎么等。例

如：Don�眛rust him no matter what he says.无论他说什么，都别相信。

�雹菸闹凶詈笠痪涫歉銮康骶湫虸t�眘?that?.句中的in all things还可以说成among other

things，表示在所有的??当中。

范文精译

我们从这幅画可以看到，一位残疾人正在奋力登山。从他脸上的汗可以得知他前面的艰 辛。但是因为他坚持不懈、不屈不挠的精神，他快到目的地——山顶了。

但是这幅画的意思超越了爬山。应该这样说，不屈不挠是迈向成功的重要因素：从长 远看，那些坚持不懈的人会成功，因为随着时间的推移，这种沉默的力量变得越来越大，挡 都挡不住。根据最近的研究表明，许多成功人士共有的一种品质就是坚持不懈。他们愿意花 更多的时间成就一件事并且面对很多困难都坚持下来。海伦·凯勒就是例证——如果努力工 作永不言弃，每个人都可以成就伟大的事业，即使他们有残疾。海伦生下时双目失明，而且 还听不见。但是她的一生从来没有丧失信心。相反，她一直学习阅读、写作，后来成为非常 著名的作家。

不管你是强是弱，你必须不断奋斗才能成功。不管你是谁，处境如何，你都必须为你 的目标不断奋斗。尽管存在各种障碍、挫折与绝境，有时让人气馁，有时让人放弃，但是只 有强者才能够持之以恒、坚持不懈、永不退却，而这是弱者无法做到的。

语言注释

①disable v.使无能；使残废 ②deduce v.推断

③austere a.严格的，严厉的

④perseverance n.坚定，不屈不挠 ⑤destination n.目的地 ⑥persevere v. 忍耐，熬住 ⑦irresistibly ad.不可抗拒地 ⑧odds n.不和，相争

⑨handicap n.妨碍，使不利 11. permanence n.持久，永久 12. persistence n.坚持不懈 13. distinguish v.区分，辨别

高分佳句

①No matter who you are or what your position is， you must keep fighting for what you want to

achieve. 不管你是谁，处境如何，你都必须为你的目标不懈地奋斗。

②Permanence， perseverance and persistence in spite of all obstacles， discouragements， and

impossibilities： it is this that in all things distinguishes the strong soul from the weak. 尽管存在

各种障碍、挫折与绝境，有时让人气馁，有时让人放弃，但是只有强者才能够持之以恒、坚 持不懈、永不退却，这是弱者无法做到的。

写作思路

写作提示语中有三个要求，因此写作应该围绕这三个要求展开。第一段，描绘漫画的内容。 重点说明登山需要毅力和恒心。第二段，展开图画的寓意，不仅登山需要毅力，生活事业要 获得成功，也需要毅力；接着文章以美国作家海伦为例说明毅力和成功的关系。最后一段， 作者发表评论。作者首先通过模仿英语名言：Whether you are a lion or a goat， you must sprint

to survive. （不管你是狮子还是山羊，你要生存就必须会快跑。）改写Whether you are strong

or weak， you must keep fighting to succeed.（不管你是强壮还是软弱，你必须不断奋斗才能 成功。）

2.爱心捐赠 Directions：

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay，you should

1�眃escribe the drawing briefly， 2�眅xplain its intended meaning，and then 3�眊ive your comments.

You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.（20 points）

背诵范文及高分语言和结构点评

As is shown in the picture，on a cold snowy day，a donation box from a charity is beginning

to thaw the snow and ice around it.�雹買t is not difficult to find the symbolic meaning of the picture：nowadays donation can play an important role in disaster relief and in helping the poor

and the disabled.

�雹赥he picture reminds us of the fact that in the recent earthquake in Sichuan，China，people

at home and abroad donated a large sum of money to the quake victims. As we know，the strong

quake flattened tens of thousands of houses and other buildings.�O③It is reported that a sizable

majority of people in the devastated zones lost their homes and property. Many people were buried

in the rubbles and lost their lives.�O④However，the donations help them pick up the pieces， and

give them composure，confidence and courage to live on.

The value of life lies not only in devotion but also in donation. ⑤ So what counts most in

life is what we do for others. ⑥Contributing money and other necessities to people who are in

great need reflects individuals’ sense of social responsibility. It also generates a feeling that is beyond words and is difficult to obtain no matter how rich one is. Therefore，I strongly advocate

that everybody offers a hand to others.�O⑦Only with our love and contribution，I am sure，would

our society become more beautiful and more harmonious.

①it作形式主语，真正的主语是不定式短语to find?；冒号的使用，则引出具体的同位语 成分，同位语中动句词helping?和名词短语disaster relief并列，共同作固定搭配play an