写作语法七宗罪

写作语法七宗罪

1. Employee can benefit more from telecommuting than employee.

2.1 Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.

2.2 Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.

2.3 The problems that are created by environmental contamination is very hard to resolve.

2.4 In present-day society, cultures were becoming very similar.

3. Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers.

4.1 Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalization may create. 4.2 The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms. 5. Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.

6. These old buildings should be destroyed, new buildings must be constructed.