高考英语(全国II)大二轮总复习与增分策略配套讲义：专题六 书面表达.doc

(3)Our school is two miles far away from here，so you’d better take a taxi.[误] Our school is two miles away from here，so you’d better take a taxi.[正] (4)After he returned back，he began to work at once.[误] After he returned，he began to work at once.[正] (5)Of the two objects，I prefer the blue one better.[误] Of the two objects，I prefer the blue one.[正]

二、高分技巧

1．恰当使用连词、连接副词等连接句子，可使文章逻辑性强，结构紧凑，层次清晰，意义贯通。

Last Sunday，when my parents went out shopping，I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning？Firstly I collected all the books，newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place.Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture.After that，I swept and mopped the floors.(2013·陕西)

2．恰当选用“贴切、地道的高级词汇”。

从书面表达的评分标准可知，运用高级词汇对提高书面表达的“档次”和得分至关重要。通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词来代替常见的词语是选用恰当词汇的有效途径。如下表所列近义词，用高级词汇代替普通词汇，会取得比较好的效果。 普通词汇 think of idea thank should be＋adj. like be addicted to different busy tell various，a variety of be engaged in inform sb.of，inform sb.that tired during sometimes be worn out in the course of occasionally，once in a while appreciate be supposed to be of＋n. be crazy about，be absorbed in，as long as on condition that most look after least the majority of attend to the minority of 高级词汇 come up with，occur to，have an explain account for 普通词汇 高级词汇 3.适当使用含有“较为丰富的语法结构”的高级句式。

感叹句、独立主格结构、特殊句式、名词性从句、定语从句、状语从句、非谓语动词等都属于较复杂的“语法结构”。这些结构的正确、交替使用，可以使文章的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映作者的语言运用能力。此外，正确使用一些谚语也能给文章增色不少。 (1)感叹句

①What a meaningful day it was！(2015·北京，书面表达二) 这是多么有意义的一天啊！

②How happy I will be！How I wish I could be younger than now！(2015·重庆，写作一) 我太开心了！我多么希望能够比现在年轻一点！ (2)独立主格结构

In the picture，a boy is fully absorbed in a book made of bamboo，with several more scrolls lying on one end of his desk.(2015·福建)

图画中，一个男孩在全神贯注地读一本由竹子做成的书，桌子的一边放着很多卷书。 (3)特殊句式

①Can you tell us when and where？(2015·安徽) 你能告诉我们什么时间以及在哪里吗？

②It shows that it is hard work and determination rather than outer conditions that play a vital role in shaping a great mind.(2015·福建)

这表明成为一个伟大人物的决定因素是艰苦的工作及毅力而不是外部条件。 ③It is the people who obey the rules that matter.(2015·江苏) 重要的是遵守这些规则的人们。

④Not only do they offer you joy and excitement，but also they encourage you to think critically.(2015·天津)

它们不仅可以让你们开心和兴奋，而且还激励你们进行批判性思考。 (4)名词性从句

①I wonder if you’d like to go with me.(2015·北京，书面表达一) 我想知道你是否愿意和我一起去。

②With the development of medical technology，we can detect whether people have major

illnesses and predict whether people have a preference for food by using saliva sample，and remind people to take appropriate exercise.(2015·广东，基础写作)

随着医疗技术的发展，我们能诊断人们是否得了什么重要疾病并能通过唾液样本预测人们对食物的偏好，同时提醒人们进行适当的锻炼。 ③It is just what I want.(2015·四川) 这正是我想要的。

④I would appreciate it if you could give me more information.(2015·重庆，写作二) 如果你能提供更多的信息我将不胜感激。 (5)定语从句

①If they often cheat in the exams，they will form a bad habit，which will have a bad effect on their life.(2015·广东，读写任务)

如果他们在考试中经常作弊，他们就会养成一个坏习惯，这将会对他们的生活产生坏的影响。 ②From this experience I have learned that questioning can serve as a bridge that helps us to seek the truth.(2015·湖北)

这次经历使我明白了质疑是帮助我们探寻真理的桥梁。

③My teacher may think I am excellent and that I can do well in my study，which can make me more confident.(2015·湖南)

我的老师可能认为我优秀并能学好习，这样能使我更加自信。

④Last but not least，everyone will be happy if praised，which is the common positive emotion that everybody likes to share.(2015·湖南)

最后但同样重要的一点，被表扬大家都会开心，这是人人都愿意分享的最常见的正能量。 ⑤The Double Ninth Festival，which is the day set aside for the elderly in our culture，is drawing near.(2015·全国Ⅱ)

重阳节即将到来，它是在我们的文化里专门为老年人设置的节日。

⑥Besides，I often teach my English teacher who comes from America Mandarin in my spare time.(2015·四川)

另外，在我的业余时间里我经常教我的英语老师普通话，他来自美国。

⑦Our school will donate 5,000 copies of different valuable books to your class，which include popular science books，classic works and so on.(2015·天津)

我们学校将向你们班级捐献5 000册有价值的不同书籍，包括科普书、经典著作等。 ⑧This is the reason why I want to interview her，not only because of her fame，but also because of her kindness and honest.(2015·安徽)

这是我想采访她的理由，不仅仅是因为她的名声，还是因为她的友善和诚实。 (6)状语从句

①If you are interested in it，let me know and I’ll send you more information.(2015·北京，书面表达一)

如果你感兴趣，告诉我，我会为你提供更多的信息。

②If you’d like to join us，please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.(2015·全国Ⅱ)

如果你想加入我们，请告诉我们，我们将于上午9点在学校大门口等你。

③If you want to speak Mandarin well.First，you should read more and watch more Chinese TV programmes.(2015·四川)

如果你想说好普通话，首先，你应该多读、多看中文电视节目。

④If you have more needs，please let me know as soon as possible.(2015·天津) 如果你有更多的需求，请尽快告诉我。

⑤In a word，you can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative.(2015·全国Ⅰ)

总之，你可以写任何相关的内容，只要有趣味并能增长见识。

⑥I hope you would be so kind as to send it to us before June 28th，so that it can be published in time.(2015·全国Ⅰ)

我希望你能发善心在6月28日以前给我们寄过来，以便能够按时出版。

⑦When I have a different opinion，I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.(2015·浙江)