高考英语(全国II)大二轮总复习与增分策略配套讲义：专题六 书面表达.doc

一、13类常见失分点

1．主谓不一致

(1)Three years have passed before we knew it.[误] Three years has passed before we knew it.[正]

(2)Every man and every woman like surfing the Internet here.[误] Every man and every woman likes surfing the Internet here.[正] (3)Many a student have chatted online.[误] Many a student has chatted online.[正] 2．时态不一致

(1)They talked and talked and soon the bus comes.[误] They talked and talked and soon the bus came.[正] (2)He said that he will come to see me soon.[误] He said that he would come to see me soon.[正]

(3)If you had come earlier，you would see the actress yesterday.[误] If you had come earlier，you would have seen the actress yesterday.[正] 3．词类误用

(1)She seated herself in the sofa and went sleep.[误] She seated herself in the sofa and went asleep.[正] (2)After the work，we went home，tiredly and hungry.[误] After the work，we went home，tired and hungry.[正]

(3)Her kind and generosity made me feel at home.[误] Her kindness and generosity made me feel at home.[正] 4．逻辑不一致

(1)I’m eager to show you around some places of interest，but some culture centers.[误] I’m eager to show you around some places of interest，or some culture centers.[正]

(2)He went to her and gave her the present he had bought，and she refused to take it and went away.[误]

He went to her and gave her the present he had bought，but she refused to take it and went away.[正]

(3)Next time you look at a person，see if his or her face is red and pale.[误] Next time you look at a person，see if his or her face is red or pale.[正] 5．代词替代不一致

(1)There are so many flowers in the flowershop that I don’t know what to buy.[误] There are so many flowers in the flowershop that I don’t know which to buy.[正] (2)It is us that are to blame for the result because we are too careless.[误] It is we that are to blame for the result because we are too careless.[正] (3)She took many photos during her stay in Beijing and showed it to me.[误] She took many photos during her stay in Beijing and showed them to me.[正] 6．介词多余

(1)Work hard，and you will make it at some time.[误] Work hard，and you will make it some time.[正]

(2)At the first time she came to see me，I was doing some reading.[误] The first time she came to see me，I was doing some reading.[正] (3)Considering about everything，the plan is quite practical.[误] Considering everything，the plan is quite practical.[正] 7．连词多余

(1)She sent me an email，asking whether how I was getting along with my classmates.[误] She sent me an email，asking how I was getting along with my classmates.[正] (2)If one more minute，and we can do it easily.[误] One more minute，and we can do it easily.[正]

(3)Because you gave us timely help，so we finished it on time.[误] Because you gave us timely help，we finished it on time.[正] 8．冠词多余

(1)As we know，the Sunday is the first day of a week.[误] As we know，Sunday is the first day of a week.[正] (2)I prefer this kind of a fruit.[误] I prefer this kind of fruit.[正]

(3)Our teacher usually tells us to behave well in the public places.[误] Our teacher usually tells us to behave well in public places.[正] 9．句子成分短缺

(1)We all strongly against the suggestion put forward at the meeting.[误] We are all strongly against the suggestion put forward at the meeting.[正] (2)What known to all is that cars have become a popular means of transport.[误] What is known to all is that cars have become a popular means of transport.[正] (3)What puzzles you actually a puzzle for many parents in China.[误] What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.[正] 10．及物与不及物动词误用

(1)All flights this morning have put off because of the thick fog.[误] All flights this morning have been put off because of the thick fog.[正]

(2)The teacher caught me cheating in the exam，but he didn’t punish for it.[误] The teacher caught me cheating in the exam，but he didn’t punish me for it.[正] (3)It is known that everything depends the sunlight for growth.[误] It is known that everything depends on the sunlight for growth.[正] 11．非谓语动词误用

(1)He admitted to make a mistake.[误] He admitted making a mistake.[正] (2)She objects to be treated like a child.[误] She objects to being treated like a child.[正]

(3)I regret saying that I can’t help you for I have many things to do.[误] I regret to say that I can’t help you for I have many things to do.[正]

(4)The desk needs to repair.[误]

The desk needs repairing./The desk needs to be repaired.[正]

(5)My parents expect me to study science and becoming a scientist.[误] My parents expect me to study science and become a scientist.[正] (6)They were made work hard all day long.[误] They were made to work hard all day long.[正] (7)I find it easy to be done.[误] I find it easy to do.[正]

(8)Comparing with you，I still have a long way to go.[误] Compared with you，I still have a long way to go.[正] (9)Everything taking into consideration，it is a good plan.[误] Everything taken into consideration，it is a good plan.[正] 12．搭配错误

(1)As time going by，more and more people prefer a healthy diet.[误] With time going by，more and more people prefer a healthy diet.[正] (2)The bridge is in construction.[误] The bridge is under construction.[正]

(3)So far as I am concerned，riding bicycles is a good solution.[误] As far as I am concerned，riding bicycles is a good solution.[正] (4)The thief ran to the direction of the hill.[误] The thief ran in the direction of the hill.[正]

(5)It is no doubt that drinking too much is harmful to health.[误] There is no doubt that drinking too much is harmful to health.[正] (6)It wasn’t long when we got to the cinema.[误] It wasn’t long before we got to the cinema.[正] 13．汉语式表达

(1)This is my first time visit to Beijing.[误] This is my first visit to Beijing.[正]

(2)I like Taiji and it is my most favorite sport.[误] I like Taiji and it is my favorite sport.[正]