2016高考英语短文改错集训（十四）

2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十四）

【专项突破】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?）,并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Passage 1

Xie Lei told me that she feels much more at home in England now, and that had seemed very strange ago now appears quite normal. “I’ve just got one more thing achieve. I have been very occupied to work that I haven’t had time for social activities. I think it’s important to have a balance in study and a social life, so I’m going to join in a few clubs. Hopeful I’ll make some new friends.”

We will follow Xie Lei’s progresses in later editions of this newspaper but for now, we wish Xie Lei all the best in his new enterprise. She deserves to succeed.

Passage 2

Good relationships between teachers or students are important to teaching and learning Only with good relationships can student and teachers cooperate well.

Good relationships depended on both sides. On the one hand, students should respect teachers and our hard work. They should polite Co teachers and ready to following their advice. On an other hand, teachers should be kindly, friendly and patient to students. They must be responsible on their teaching and help students. If both sides treat10 each other in a friendly way, teaching and learning in class will be highly efficient.

Passage 3

The news which the English Entrance Examination will be reformed has caused a big “earthquake” in our country. Many people, included students, are for it. But there are also some people are against it. Then, is it better to do so or not? Personally, I think the reform

has between advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, it can reduce students’ learn burden and enable English to return back to its true function. On the other hand, it will cause students to spend less time on studying English and to attached less importance to English. If so, students will not have a good knowledge of English. What’s more, if students don’t have so a good ability, they will not be able to broaden our horizon and meet the future challenges.

Passage 4

Recently, smog weather has became more and more serious in parts of China. People forced to wear masks to avoid breathe poisonous air. To settle this problem, the series of measures should be taken. First, we should enact(颁布) more strict law on environmental protection to regulate the industrial punish those factories what ignore the protection. Second, we should develop environmentally-friendly products to improve air quality. Besides, people should build up protection awareness to form a habit by using green products or saving energy. In my opinion, if we all act together, their environment will become more better.

Passage 5

One year ago, I had a special English lesson hold at the railway station．It was quite different from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no fixed seats．

Gathering at the entrance of the station, we told to collect as many English words and

sentences as possible here．Curious and excited, we walked around the station and looked everywhere, search for any information in English．Whenever an English word comes into sight, the class would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new world．With the Chinese translation and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease．

Now, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go．

Passage 6

Generally speaking, I’m a person who have the ability to control myself. Whether at school and at home, I can be aware of the dos and don’ts and always focus on my study, so I am the one of the top students in my class. Besides, whenever I meet with anything or somebody unpleasant, I can calm down and only in this way can I get along good with others.

I think it is determination what is of great importance if you want to improve your

self-control.In order control yourself easily and effectively, you are supposed to make some rule to follow. Also you’d better ask others to keep an eye on yourself, which makes the difference in helping you be responsible to what you do.

Passage 7

This afternoon 1 went to see my grandfather by a bus．It was very crowded and I had to stand．Besides me，there was a woman hold a little boy in her arms．In front of her, a young man occupies two seats，pretending to be sleeping．I heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man．Beyond her expectations，the woman answered with a smile，“Be quiet．This uncle must very tired because of hard work．”The young man must have heard the word．His face turned red but offered one seat to the woman at once．

2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十四）答案

Passage 1

Xie Lei told me that she feels much more at home in England now, and that what

had seemed very strange ago now appears quite normal. “I’ve just got one before

more thing ∧achieve. I have been very occupied to work that I haven’t had time for

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social activities. I think it’s important to have a balance in study and a social life,

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so I’m going to join in a few clubs. Hopeful I’ll make some new friends.” Hopefully We will follow Xie Lei’s progresses in later editions of this newspaper but for now, progress

we wish Xie Lei all the best in his new enterprise. She deserves to succeed. her

Passage 2

Good relationships between teachers or students are important to teaching and learning. Only and

with good relationships can student and teachers cooperate well.

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Good relationships depended on both sides. On the one hand, students should respect teachers depend

and our hard work. They should ^ polite to teachers and ready to following their advice. On an other

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teaching and help students. If both sides treat to each other in a friendly way, teaching and learning

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Passage 3

1. which-that 2. included-including 3. people后加who 4. between-both 5. learn-learning

6. back删掉 7. on-in 或删掉on 8. attached-attach 9. so-such 10. our-their

Passage 4

1.became改为become 2.people后加are 3.breathe改为breathing 4.the改为a 5.law改为laws 6. what改为that/which 7.by改为of 8.or改为and 9.their改为our 10.去掉more或more改为much

Passage 5

71.hold改为held 72.familiar to改为familiar with 73.or改为and 74.told前加were

75.here改为there 76.search改为searching 77.comes改为came 78.cheers前面the去掉 79.vividly改为vivid 80.where改为wherever

Passage 6

1.have改为has 2.and改为or 3.am后the去掉 4.anything改为ssomething 5.good改为well 6.what改为that 7.order后加to 8.rule改为rules 9.the改为a 10.to改为for Passage 7

This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a bus. It was very crowded and I

had to stand. Besides me, there was a woman hold a little boy in her arms. In front of

Beside holding

her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be sleeping. I heard the little boy

occupied

curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps curiously that或去掉if

the woman would blame the man. Beyond her expectations, the woman answered with my

a smile, “Be quiet. This uncle must∧ very tired because of hard work.” The young be

man must have heard the word. His face turned red but offered one seat to the woman at once.

words and