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面。作者第一句就点明了他/她与Dong Hua的友情:亲密无间,两小无猜。接下来用具体的事实进行了说明,他们曾经用几枚硬币买糖然后分糖吃,寥寥数语,使读者感受到童年的情趣。下一段作者连用三个排比句“I missed her so much.I thought of her often as the years went by.I kept on wishing I could see or hear from her again.”来表达对朋友的思念之情,也为接下来的网上偶遇进行了铺垫。
3.本文词数虽然不多,但词语和句型的运用非常娴熟。简单句和复合句的交错使用使文章显得错落有致。高级句型使文章特别符合英语表达习惯,如“Then came the sad day when Dong Hua moved away with her parents.”等。值得一提的还有一些高考重点短语的运用,如as well as, a handful of, keep on, in turn, come across, by accident, in touch等。最后一句点睛之笔更使文章达到高潮:友谊无界,否极泰来。
二、日常活动
One possible version:
The passage mainly tells us a stay-at-home mum's opinion on doing household chores. She thinks most of the chores should be done by parents if they stay at home while children are expected to give their possible help.
Opinions differ on whether students should do some household chores if they are at home.Some parents think that it is necessary for students to do some housework, as it is a good way to develop children's characters.By doing housework, children can understand the hardship of their parents.On the other hand, some parents think children should pay more attention to their school subjects, as doing housework will waste some precious study time.
As far as I am concerned, I think students should share some housework with their parents.I try my best to help my mother out by setting the table or washing dishes.My mother is very busy with her work every day, but she still spares her time to prepare three meals for us.Thanks to the time we spend together doing housework, I understand the deep love of my mother and develop the good habit of taking good care of others.It also teaches me the sense of responsibility.Although no pocket money can be got from doing housework, I understand that being a responsible person is above everything.
精彩点击:
1.范文概括部分的复合句生动地表达了一位家庭主妇对孩子是否应该做家务的观点。句中接连两个被动语态的运用使文章更贴近英语表达的习惯。
2.范文第二段从正反两方面对中学生是否应该做家务进行了表述并列出了各自的理由。范文最后一段从作者自身角度,介绍了他/她是如何看待中学生做家务这一问题的,并着重介绍了自己的做法以及中学生适当做一些家务带来的好处。文章如此布局圆满地完成了写作内容中第二部分所要求的内容。
3.范文词语和句型运用娴熟,简单句和各种复合句的交错运用使文章显得错落有致。一些高考重点短语的应用也为文章增色不少,如on the other hand, as far as I am concerned, share sth with sb, try one's best to do sth, be busy with, spare one's time to do sth, prepare sth for sb, develop the habit of, take care of等。以让步状语从句结尾更使文章在形式和内容上都得到了提升。
三、学校生活
One possible version:
The passage mainly talks about a proposal calling on teachers nationwide to refuse gifts during Teachers' Day and its related comments and survey results.
In order to get more care and attention to their kids from the teachers, some parents try every way to please the teachers.Giving gifts during Teachers' Day becomes a fashion, which may cost the gift-senders a lot of money and become a burden to poor parents.
I did not give any material gifts to my teachers, because I think studying hard and behaving myself are the best ways to show my respect and appreciation for them.Gift-giving is not the only way to express gratitude.Of course, I do not oppose the idea that students and parents choose some meaningful and less controversial ways to express their gratitude to teachers.For example, students can organize class parties to express their respect for their teachers and parents can invite them to visit their houses as guests.
精彩点击:
1.范文概括部分简洁明了,以现在分词短语作定语的表达形式很好地总结了阅读材料中倡议的主要内容。
2.范文第二段深刻分析了教师节学生和家长送给老师礼物的原因及后果;第三段阐述了作者是否送老师礼物及原因以及作者是如何看待教师节送礼这种现象的。作者对教师节送礼的看法是:他/她并不反对给教师送礼物,认为可以通过组织班会或者邀请老师来家里做客等形式表达对老师的感激之情。
3.范文句型丰富多样,如介词短语作状语、非限制性定语从句、同位语从句及并列句等。一些高考重点表达的运用也使文章读起来朗朗上口,如in order to, cost sb sth, become a burden to sb, show one's respect for sb, express one's gratitude to sb等。
四、兴趣与爱好
One possible version:
The passage tells us about the celebration of the author's birthday now and in the past.Her husband doesn't like the idea of having birthday parties but she meaningfully celebrated her birthday twice at 12 and 17.
Nowadays many high school students tend to have birthday parties at restaurants.At the same time, a lot of birthday gifts, such as birthday cakes and something expensive, will be bought and given to the birthday person.However, all the money needed is from the hard-earned money of their parents.
As we know, most teenagers from Western countries usually find a part-time job to earn their pocket money.We Chinese teenagers mainly depend upon our parents for money for our daily use.It is wise for us to celebrate our birthday economically.We can give some hand-made gifts and our best wishes to the birthday person instead of expensive gifts.
I remembered clearly celebrating my 15th birthday.My classmates sent me many special things, such as a pen with my name on it, a novel I liked best and an English song sung by them.I think luxurious parties are a waste of our precious time and limited money.
精彩点击:
1.范文概括部分总结了阅读材料中丈夫及妻子各自对于过生日的看法以及妻子两次非常有意义的生日庆祝活动。
2.范文第二段介绍目前青少年过生日的普遍做法:在饭店举行生日宴会、购买昂贵的
生日礼物。随着经济发展以及外来文化的影响,生日聚会在我国青少年中广受欢迎,作者通过第三段分析了国内外青少年的不同观点及经济现状——外国青少年举办生日聚会、购买生日礼物的好多费用是他们平时赚的钱,而不是伸手向父母要的。最后一段介绍了作者过生日的做法及观点。
3.范文词语和句型运用娴熟,各种句型的交错运用使文章特别符合英语表达的习惯。一些高考重点短语及句型的运用也为文章增色不少,如tend to do sth, as we know, depend upon, it is wise for sb to do sth, instead of, a waste of等。
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