2017英语高考作文真题解析

假定你是李华,你班上最近转来一位身材肥胖的新生,很多同学都嘲笑他。这让你感到非常气愤,但又无计可施。就此请你用英语写封邮件给你的网友Tom求助,内容要点包括： 1．简略介绍该情况； 2．表达你对该事的看法； 3．征求Tom的建议。 注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数。 Dear Tom,

How are you going? I miss you very much._______________

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Yours, Li Hua

【答案】One possible version: Dear Tom,

How are you going? I miss you very much. I feel very depressed now because there is an annoying thing that discourages me.

There is a new classmate who is very fat coming to my class. Many classmates laugh at him just because of his weight, which makes me angry. In my opinion, looking down on the newcomer is a foolish behavior, and it makes themselves look like a fool. As a result, the relationship between classmates must be broken.

Unluckily, I have no idea to solve the problem. So I hope you can give me some suggestions. I will appreciate it if you can help me get out of the trouble. Best wishes!

Yours, Li Hua

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【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。原因状语从句的使用：I feel very depressed now because there is an annoying thing that discourages me.定语从句的使用：There is a new classmate who is very fat coming to my class.非限制性定语从句的使用：Many classmates laugh at him just because of his weight, which makes me angry.固定句型的使用：I will appreciate it if you can help me get out of the trouble.

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