(浙江专用)2020版高考英语大一轮复习写作技能专题四写作模板构造完美框架 练习

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At that moment, they had to take action and get out. They shouted at the top

of their voice, but no one could hear them. They began__to__worry and were convinced they had to stay in their snowmobiling__buddy for the night. Suddenly, a good idea occurred to Kathy. She took off one of her clothes and burned it. Seeing the fire, people ran over and managed to pull__her__car out with all their efforts, making Cris ashamed for his refusal to others. Paragraph 2：

When Kathy arrived at her home, her mother was waiting for her. She asked Kathy

what had happened. Kathy explained，“I made a terrible mistake. But for others’ help, I couldn’t have been home for the night.”When asked what she would do when someone had difficulty,__Kathy answered immediately that she would do anything to help others because today’s experience turned__out to be a great lesson for her.

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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

To be honest, sometimes, I hate it when I start thinking about money because it brings me down and drives me sad. When I was younger, I always wondered why money was so important. There wasn’t anything I needed. It’s good to be a kid, since he or she doesn’t have to worry about responsibilities. But as everyone get older, of course that changes. I work almost every day, but it’s still not enough. That’s what is discouraging—it’s never enough.

Right now I have to sacrifice(牺牲) the money I make. I put my school on hold so that I can pay for my girlfriend’s school fee and everything else. I’m very supportive in everything I do, and she is also very supportive. We warm each other up. Hoping she really gets everything right, because we only have each other. I find that hope is my inspiration and that everything will work out however hard it gets. Even though I find that life is hard, it never stops me from helping others, especially those who are less fortunate. While I might be going through hard times myself, there are those out there who could be__going__through__even harder times.

Last night, on my way home I stopped by to buy some burgers in a fast food restaurant. A homeless man approached me and asked，“Do you have any bottles lying

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around？” I knew he would recycle them for a few cents, but I didn’t have any. I said，“Sorry, I don’t.” And again he asked，“Can you spare some change？” I smiled and said，“Sorry, I can’t.”He was very __polite. He smiled back and said，“OK, thank__you．” Even though he didn’t have anything, he was still in__good__spirits. Just from the way he spoke, I could tell he was fine.

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1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1：

I went in and ate my meal, but in my head I wondered if the homeless man was hungry.

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No matter how hard life is, there are always ways to handle it._____________________

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I went in and ate my meal, but in my head I wondered if the homeless man was hungry. After I finished my meal I decided to order another one for him. I didn’

t know if he was still around, but I thought my helping would warm him up. They handed me the hot chocolate first and as I waited for my burger, I noticed the homeless man standing beside me. I asked, “Are you hungry? This hot chocolate is for you and there’s a burger coming up for you too.” He replied politely,__ “Thank__you. That’s very kind of you.” Paragraph 2:

No matter how hard life is, there are always ways to handle it. And it’s not

always through money. It’s through love. If you love someone, you will help him and give him what he needs. The love you give today might be forgotten tomorrow.

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But it doesn’t matter. Love everybody because that’s the greatest thing you can give and it is the start of your life trip.

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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was a warm and sunny morning at the Central Park Zoo. Abigail and her classmates were abuzz with__excitement as their school bus entered the zoo park lot. Today, Abigail’s class was going on a field trip to the zoo to learn more about the animals and their natural habitats.

“Before you leave the bus, please make sure you have your buddy！” Mrs. Brown announced. To make sure no one got__lost in the zoo, each student had a buddy (companion/friend). Abigail’s buddy was named Derrick. Derrick loves animals and was also excited to go to the zoo. But sometimes, Derrick does not follow__the__rules and gets in trouble. Abigail hoped that today, Derrick would follow the rules so they would not get in trouble.

While the rest of the students got off the bus, Abigail and Derrick quickly ran off to explore. They found the exhibits for many different kinds of animals and learned a lot about their natural habitats. They saw the elephants playing and they saw giraffes eating. They saw the polar bears sleeping and the monkeys leaping. Abigail asked Derrick：

“Derrick, what is your favorite animal？”

“I think I like chimpanzees best. They have__a__lot__of__energy,__just like me! What animal do you like, Abigail？”

“I love polar bears! I think their lifestyle in the Arctic is very interesting.”

A few hours later, Abigail and Derrick started to feel hungry. They made their way back to the zoo entrance to eat lunch at the Rainforest Cafe. The Rainforest Cafe is both Abigail and Derrick’s favorite restaurant because there is an aquarium inside. The restaurant is also famous for its chocolate cake, which Abigail ordered for dessert after they had finished their lunch.

As Abigail was finishing her cake, Derrick excused himself to go to the restroom. About ten minutes later, a sudden alarm began to go off and a voice came over the loudspeaker.

“Attention! Someone has opened the chimpanzee exhibit! Some chimpanzees have escaped！”

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People were screaming and starting to run. Abigail looked for Derrick, but he was nowhere to be found.

注意：

1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1：

As more and more people ran out of the zoo, Abigail began to think

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As Abigail raced up the path to the animal exhibits, she was stopped

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As more and more people ran out of the zoo, Abigail began to think where her

buddy,__Derrick could be. She got up from the table quickly and circled back to the restrooms, calling Derrick’s name. There was no answer, so Abigail__left the restaurant. As she looked around the zoo grounds, she remembered that Derrick__had__a__lot__of__energy and had told her that chimpanzees were his favorite animals.__Derrick wouldn’t have left the restaurant to release the chimpanzees，would he? Oh no! Abigail was sure she knew where Derrick had gone. Paragraph 2：

As Abigail raced up the path to the animal exhibits, she was stopped in her tracks

by none other than Derrick himself, with two chimpanzees cradled in his arms. He offered a small, guilty smile. “I didn’t mean to let them escape，” he began. “I just wanted to take them out to play for a little while! I took the key from a zookeeper who wasn’t looking. But then, the lock broke and...” Behind Abigail, Mrs. Brown had begun to walk up the path and saw Derrick holding the animals with__excitement. It was clear from her stern expression that he was in big trouble

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