2016届高考英语 专题十七 短文改错（全国通用）

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manyas possible. muchPassage 8 (2014·昆明一模)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It's pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.I have found

that some of my classmates study deeply into the night.What's more，they did not spare any time to exercise during the day.But they are less energetic than the others in class and can't always stay focusing on their lessons.Worse than that，some of them seldom have breakfast，with which is also a bad habit and will certainly do harm for their health.

Obvious，it's important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet.We must

learn to make wise use of our time，and only in this way can we keep fit and study well.I hope my advices can help you.

Thanks for listen.

答案

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listeningPassage 9 (2014·西铁一中诊断)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线( )，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Hello，Peter.I'm very grateful for your concern about my coming exam.To tell

you truth，I have been busy prepare for the exam recently.Some classmates are feeling real stressed due to the exam，but I don't take them so seriously.I always learn in a relaxing mood and I'm making a great progress.Now that I had tried my best，it doesn't matter much to me what the result is.

In my opinion，we should keep a good balance among our study，rest or exercise.I

believe we can be succeeded if we prepare for the exam in a proper way. I'd appreciate it if you could give me some good advices. 答案 you

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advicePassage 10 (2013·沈阳一模)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My mother is very good for raising plants and flowers. We have plants and flowers

indoors and outdoors all the years round. Some of our plants were very small several years before, but now they are large and very beautifully. On top of our roof there is a larger glass－enclosed green－house. All our friends love to come to our house see the beautiful world my mother had made for us. Every morning and evening we see my mother taken care of her plants like little children. As her real children have grown up, and my mother devotes more time to her garden. This is the very good way of spending her free time. 答案

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Passage 1 (2015·青岛一模)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The saying that practice makes perfect mean that after you have plenty of

practice in what you were doing，you will be perfect in it.If you want improve your study and work，remembering that the most important thing is how to put the knowledge you have learned into practice.For example，when learning a language，though you can make full use for your talent，practice is necessary.If you only learn grammar rules by the heart and don't do enough exercise，it's certain that you can't understand the language perfectly.But if you real practise a lot，maybe you will understand them much better.In this way，you can apply that you have learned better. 答案

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