2014-6六级作文预测 范文

预测一

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on Square Dancing. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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Square Dancing

The cartoon above shows a group of Chinese old ladies (also called dama) are doing a square dancing in front of a residential building. The noise coming from their amplifier has made the man crazy. Although he has complained to the government, it seems to be meaningless and ends up with the dama's complete victory.

In fact, it is the freedom of senior citizens to dance together. Square dancing is beneficial to them since it can maintain their health both physically and psychologically. Meanwhile, it helps to enrich their spare time. However, every coin has two sides. Such dancing can easily disturb the peaceful lives of residents in its neighborhood. Nowadays, noisy square dancing has become a common social concern.

To cope with the problem, effective steps must be taken. Firstly, dancing groups should control the sound volume so as not to disturb the everyday lives of other people. Secondly, the government also needs to provide the public with alternative spaces in which they can do group dancing. What’s more, rules and restrictions on noisy recreation and activities should be made while there is no need to ban square dancing in public places.

【点评】

第一段对图画内容进行了解释；第二段谈及广场舞正反面影响，指出广场舞的噪音引起了社会的广泛关注；第三段结合作者的观点，提出三点解决建议。 第一段中ends up with意为“以??结尾”，complete victory意为“大获全胜”；第二段中is beneficial to意为“对??有益”，maintain their health both physically and psychologically意为“保持他们的身心健康”；第三段中Firstly,...Secondly,... What’s more,表示列举，意为“首先??其次??再次”，control the sound volume意为“控制声音音量”。

预测二

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Online Booking of Railway Tickets following the outline given below. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

1 人们对网上订票意见各异； 2 我的看法及建议。 【范文】

Online Booking of Railway Tickets

Online ticketing system has been launched to meet the requirement of train ticket booking. It is true that the system makes the whole process of booking railway ticket faster and more convenient as well as saving time and energy. But it seems to be easily broken down when there are so many users rush into the website at the same time. Therefore, people vary their opinions on the system.

As far as I am concerned, this system facilitates the process of purchasing train tickets. You can choose the train routes according to listed time schedules and available seats with pricing without waiting for hours in line. But there still exists some shortcomings of this still-new online booking system. Not only does the site crash on a regular basis, but also most elderly and migrant workers have no way to get tickets because they have no access to Internet. What’s more, people usually find they finish the payment but fail to get one ticket. Apart from the related network facilities to be improved and better services to be offered, government should take measures to reduce the demand of railway tickets. 【点评】

第一段指出网上订票系统方便了人们订票，但是由于系统容易崩溃使得人们对该系统持有异议；第二段结合自己的观点分析了网上订票系统的利弊，并结合劣势提出具体建议，完善该系统。

第一段中faster and more convenient意为“更快捷便利”，saving time and energy意为“节省时间和精力”，broken down意为“崩溃”；第二段中Not only ...but also 意为“不仅??而且”,have no access to意为“无法接触到”,Apart from意为“除了??”,reduce the demand of意为“减少对??的需求”。

预测三

Directions: While we are driving luxurious cars, living in big house, enjoying power heating and cooling system we are also breathing toxic air, drinking polluted water, eating contaminated food.

You are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay centered on the topic “Do we need enjoy our material life at the sacrifice of environment.” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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Do We Need Enjoy Our Material Life at the Sacrifice of Environment?

With the remarkable improvement of people's living condition, they could dream whatever they wanted to dream and go wherever they wanted to go. While they are enjoying comfortable life, the changes having happened in environment break their peaceful lives.

Increasing amounts of rubbish mean that many cities are at the risk of being surrounded by landfill sites. Causal littering, direct emission of chemical gas and the popularity of private cars does great harm to air. With too many trees being cut down, forests are facing desertification.

To solve the environmental problems, united efforts are needed. Firstly, government should make out a code of rules to guide industries and encourage them to protect environment while making profits. Secondly, enterprises and factories should ensure that their emission of waste gas and water is safe and meet the emission standard. What’s more, people should raise their awareness of protecting the environment and keep in mind that environmental protection is a long-term commitment.

【点评】

文章第一段指出，随着物质条件的改善，人们享受物质生活的同时环境不断发生变化；第二段列举了几种环境变化；第三段中就如何解决环境问题分别针对政府，企业和公众提出几点建议。

第一段中With the remarkable improvement of意为“随着??的巨大改善”；第二段中at the risk of 意为“冒着??风险”，does great harm to 意为“对??有害”；第三段中protect environment while making profits意为“获取利益的同时保护环境”，emission of waste gas and water意为“废水废气的排放”，raise their awareness意为“提高意识”。

预测四

Directions: When facing the job market, some people would rather be “a big fish in a small pond” than “a small fish in a big pond”, while some others hold the opposite idea. You are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay centered on career objective. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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While job hunting, people should decide whether to go with a large company or a small one. As a small fish in a big pond, some people would like to be in a big company because larger companies provide better benefits like health insurance or retirement plans. Besides, people can change positions and explore a new area without leaving the company. On the contrary, the others choose the small companies for the reason that it offers more chances for them to practice abilities and gain reputation.

But every coin has two sides. There still are some disadvantages in each kind. In big companies, you may face fiercer competitions and chances of getting promotion are lower as there are a large number of prominent talents. Meanwhile, smaller companies typically don't have as extensive of benefits package as larger companies do.

All in all, there's no fixed answer to this question and it will largely depend on what you hope to accomplish and how you work best in an organization. Beyond that, it will be largely determined by where you fit best. 【点评】

第一段指出”选择去大公司还是小公司工作”是每位找工作的人都会面临的抉择，然后列举了两者各自的优势；第二段分别分析了两种公司的劣势；第三段进行总结，指出这个问题没有定论，取决于个人意愿。 第一段中better benefits意为“更好的福利”，On the contrary意为“相反地”, offers more chances意为“提供更多机会”；第二段中face fiercer competitions意为“面临更激烈的竞争”，chances of getting promotion意为“升职的机会”， prominent talents意为“杰出人才”；第三段中fixed answer意为“固定答案”,depend on意为“取决于”。

预测五

Directions: Write a short essay entitled Stress and Relaxation by commenting the proverb “If we could learn how to balance rest against effort, calmness against strain, quiet against turmoil, we would assure ourselves of joy in living and psychological health for life (Josephine Rathbone).

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Stress and Relaxation

With the development of economy, we live in an incredibly high-speed society. Everything moves on so fast that we have to think and react quickly. At some point, everybody will suffer from or just feel loads of pressure from every aspect of our daily life. Just as what Josephine Rathbone has said, we’re now at the edge of losing our joy of relaxation.

It is true that certain amount of stress helps us to gain success in life. Without stress, we may find life would be boring and have no motivation. But if we couldn’t control stress properly, we may become easily frustrated and feeling bad about ourselves. Furthermore, too much stress can wear us down and make us sick, both mentally and physically.

As a result, we should learn to cope with stress and relax ourselves. Firstly, try to view stressful situations from a more positive perspective and encourage ourselves to take on challenges. Second, try to exercise regularly since physical activity plays a key role in reducing the effects of stress. Lastly, eating healthy food and get enough sleep as feeling tired may cause you to think irrationally and increase your stress.

【点评】

第一段指出随着经济的发展，人们的生活节奏不断加快，生活压力不断加大；第二段指出适当的压力是动力，但是如果不能掌控好，压力会产生负面影响；第三段指出要学会处理压力，自我放松，之后列绝了几点建议。

第一段中At some point意为“在某种程度上”，at the edge of 意为“在??边沿上”；第二

段中have no motivation意为“做??没有动力”，wear down意为“拖垮，使疲劳”；第三段中from a more positive perspective意为“从更积极的角度”。

The importance of reading classics

as many people say, reading classics plays a significant role to one's growing. because all of the classics are the positive results of wisdom. we can learn much knowledge and become more intelligent by reading them. especially, when we are during our growing time, it helps us get many right minds to reading more famous books.however, now people who enjoy reading those classical books are getting less and less. there are a lot of reasons for this phenomena. to begin with, there are many other leisure activities in the modern society, young men go to do these things instead of reading. what's more,many people prefer some other books to classics because they think classics are useless.

i think, we university men should take some effective actions to prevent the situation. we should read classics as many as possible in our spare time, and we shouldn't just scan those words and phrases over our minds but to use your head to think more about those.