2020版高考英语大二轮复习专题六写作规范练（八）

写作规范练(八)

(限时：35分钟)

写作(共两节，满分35分)

第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

[2019·唐山一模]I like seeing English movies. In my spare time, I'd like to find and enjoying hot movies, among that The Lord of the Rings impresses me most. It has three series and I like both of them. Though the first volume was released on 2001, it is still not out of the date. In the movie, the scenery is so beautifully that I can't move my eyes away. It is shot in New Zealand but I decide to go there some day. It shows me a world science fiction, where there are all kinds of creature. Movies give me pleasure and enlarge my vision.

答案与解析：

I like seeing English movies. In my spare time, I'd like to find and enjoying

①enjoy

hot movies, among that The Lord of the Rings impresses me most. It has three series

②which

and I like both of them. Though the first volume was released on 2001, it is still

③all

④in

not out of the date. In the movie, the scenery is so beautifully that I can't move

⑥beautiful

my eyes away. It is shot in New Zealand but I decide to go there some day. It shows

⑦was

⑧and

me a world ∧ science fiction, where there are all kinds of creature . Movies give

⑨of

⑩creatures

me pleasure and enlarge my vision.

①enjoying改为enjoy 本句谓语动词后的find与enjoy应是并列关系，would like to do sth.为固定用法，故将enjoying改为enjoy。

②that改为which 分析句子结构可知，此处引导非限制性定语从句，hot movies为先行词，指物，引导词前有介词among，应用which引导该从句，故将that改为which。

③both改为all 根据上文中提到的three series可知，《指环王》有三部，both指“两者”；all指“三者或三者以上”，所以此处应用all来指代，故将both改为all。

④on改为in 年份前通常用介词in，故将on改为in。

⑤删除the out of date意为“过时”，是固定短语，故删除the。

⑥beautifully改为beautiful 分析句子结构可知，此处作系动词is的表语，表示主语的状态或特征，应用形容词，故将beautifully改为beautiful。

⑦is改为was 该系列电影于2001～2003年间上映，为过去事件，应用一般过去时，故将is改为was。

⑧but改为and 根据句意可知，“该系列电影拍摄于新西兰”和“我决定将来有一天去那里”之间为并列关系，并非转折关系，故将but改为and。

⑨在world后加of a world of science fiction意为“科幻世界”，其中of表示所属关系，故在world后加of。

⑩creature改为creatures creature意为“生物”，为可数名词，且根据前面的all kinds of可以确定此处应用复数形式，故将creature改为creatures。

第二节 书面表达(满分25分)

[2019·山东省、湖北省联考]假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Terry一行人要来你市体验元宵节，他请你帮他们预订酒店，请你给他回一封电子邮件。要点如下：

1.表示欢迎； 2.询问到达时间；

3.询问具体要求(价位、房间数等)。 注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考范文： Dear Terry，

I'm honored to know that you've decided to have a taste of the Lantern Festival in my city. I'm also more than pleased to reserve a hotel for you in advance. But I need some details of your travel.

Firstly, when will your flight arrive at the airport? If I'm available then, I will pick you up. Besides, prices of a hotel room range from RMB 399 to 999, so which kind of rooms do you prefer? And more importantly, how many rooms do you exactly need? Only if I figure out all of the questions can I make reservations for you.

Please give me more detailed information about your schedule. Looking forward to your early coming.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua