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高三英语写作专题一 记事 如何写好记叙文（一件事情）

在英语高考的各种作文体裁中，记叙文需要应试者具有更全面的语言技能与篇章组织能力。英语高考中常见的议论文和说明文分别要求语言的准确性和论证的合理性、可信性；而记叙文的语言则以生动、真实、 贴切为准则。同一个记叙文题目，不同的人会描述不同的人物经历或事件，又很少有固定的表达或句式可供参考，这时作者的综合语言水平就会表现出来，对能否取得高分起到了相当重要的作用。 这就要求考生平时要多注意语言的磨练和积累。

记叙文写作技巧:

1). 仔细审题，明确主题，选准素材，罗列提纲。 2). 写好第一段

最好能采用一个复句并且用上几个高中水平的高级词汇。这样的文章开篇方式会使读者或阅卷人确信接下来的文章也一样精彩。

3). 结构要清晰

下笔之前一定要对整篇文章的结构有一个完整的构想，作文的框架、主题和脉络是最重要的采分点。要清楚每一段要陈述哪些内容，不仅可以增强文章的逻辑性和可接受性，还可以使整篇作文的行文水到渠成，不会有凑字数的烦恼。所叙述的事件都应包括开头(beginning)，主体(main body)和结尾(ending)三个部分。不论叙述一个人或一件事，必须有情节发展的过程。有时可以有冲突、高潮，这样文章不会平淡无奇。

记叙文写作要点如下：

１)．明确写作目的和叙述的中心思想，段落叙述始终围绕着主题而展开，避免空间的叙述和与主题无关的内容。

２)． 明确五个“W”和一个“H”

要写好记叙文，首先必须确定写些什么，然后懂得如何收集、选取素材，而不能提笔就写，写到哪里算哪里。

一篇完整的记叙文要能够把某一事件的经过情形介绍清楚，能回答有关这件事情的五个“W”和一个“H” ：when(时间) where（地点） who（人物） why（原因） what（经过） how(结果)，做到有条有理，使读者易于明白。

３)． 一篇记叙文，无论长短如何都应该是一个完全独立的事实，因此，在下笔时必须明确：该从何处开始叙述，该在何处结束叙述，以及应该提供何种事实才能使叙述完整。

How to write a story

Appreciation & Accumulation

Underline useful phrases: “ ”

Underline transitional words (衔接词/过渡词): “△△” Underline wonderful sentences: “～～～～”

On Mid-autumn Day last year, Li Yue and her classmates went to Jiuan Nursing Home as volunteers. Hardly had they arrived when they presented the elderly with flowers and mooncakes. Then they were occupied in cleaning the windows and sweeping the floors. Due to their work, all the dust was cleared away. After that, they were in the yard chatting with the elderly and dancing to them. Satisfied with what they did, the elderly thought highly of them and said it was a beautiful day, which left a deep impression on their minds.

There’s no doubt that Li Yue and her classmates were warm-hearted. Not only did they bring joy to others but also enriched their own lives.

Last night witnessed the honour of John, who was presented with his award for his bravery to save his neighbour.

This is how the story goes. Studying in his room, John heard a scream. Out rushed John and his father, seeing a man running away. Much to his shock, he found his neighbor Ms Slade lying in her garden bleeding heavily after being stabbed repeatedly. What’s worse, her hands were almost cut off. John immediately treated the most severe injuries to her hands and applied pressure to the wounds to slow the bleeding until the police and ambulance arrived. Thanks to John’s quick thinking and the first aid skills he learned at school, Ms Slade was saved.

What impress me most are John’s bravery and knowledge of first aid. A knowledge of first aid can make a real difference to life so that we are supposed to learn about first aid to help others and ourselves in emergencies. In a word, what John did is admirable and undoubtedly he deserves the honor .

Six elements of a story. (5W+1H) The structure of a story

When The beginning

a story Who

Where a story The development What

Why The climax How

The result/ ending

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请以 \我所遇到的最大挑战为题，写一篇100 - 120词的短文，记述自己曾遭遇的事。文章内容需要包括： 1．简要记述事情经过 2．你的感受或从中获得的启示 The Biggest Challenge I've Ever Met

In our daily life, we unavoidably come across various challenges now and then._____

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In our daily life, we unavoidably come across various challenges now and then. The biggest challenge in my life happened when I entered senior high school. I was shocked to find what the physics teacher taught was totally beyond me and I lost my confidence completely. Thinking I just lacked the gift for physics, I stopped making efforts and my grades were poor. Fortunately, my teacher didn’t give up on me.

Instead, she helped me analyze my problem and I realized needed to rise to challenges bravely. I regained my confidence, adjusted approaches and worked hard. Now I’m one of the top students in physics.

From the above experience, I’ve learned that it is not our inborn gifts but our efforts that help us achieve success. When confronted with challenges, we should fight bravely instead of giving up halfway.

In our daily life, we unavoidably come across various challenges now and then. Hard as they are, they shape who we are. / However, whenever we face the challenge, fight against it, never say die, and life will be wonderful.

Dating back to the Art Festival of 2011, I was chosen by my classmates to enter the piano competition. However, hardly have I touched the instruments since I attended the junior high school. What a big challenge to me! Fight against it or escape from it? Considering three days, I seated myself in front of the piano. Fearing lose the game, I devoted all my free time to practicing. Gradually, my music Muse came back, so did my confidence. On the competition day, I step on the stage calmly and performed perfectly, winning the applause from the audience.

When faced with challenges, we adolescents are supposed to keep trying with burning enthusiasm as well as countless courage. We should firmly hold the view that whatever hardship/ordeal(磨难) we are confronted with, we can cope with them at last with the efforts as well as will-power.

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meet/overcome/conquer/ rise to challenges /fight against challenges

1. I was too nervous to speak clearly, thinking that I couldn't live up to others' expectation. Then, it was students' encouragement that gave me the confidence to overwhelm the challenge.

2. Every challenge means a new opportunity. We fulfill our potential and achieve our dreams by meeting one challenge after another.

3. Additionally, being well-prepared is a stepping stone to success. Success never comes to us accidentally, but as a result of continuous preparations. With sufficient efforts and a strong will, we can overcome any challenge. 4. I spared no effort to make it. Finally all the effort paid off.

5. Confronted with challenges, we have no choice but to make continuous attempts. -