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写作训练一
句子润色——简单句的高级句式
简单句其实也可以不简单,若将简单句与非谓语动词短语、形容词短语、介词短语、同位语、独立主格结构等巧妙地合并在一起,不但可以表达更丰富的内容,而且也使句子变得更精彩,充分显示你在英语表达上的实力。以下各句选自近年各省市高考写作范文的高级简单句,请补充完整，欣赏、熟记、模仿： 1. 同位语
I want to have a pen friend, hopefully_______________________________________________. 我想有一个笔友, 希望是一个二十出头且兴趣相投的女孩子。(同位语中又有两个并列的介词短语修饰) 2. 形容词短语
___________________,Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. 出生于美国的托马斯·爱迪生是一个伟大的科学家和发明家。 3. 不定式短语
______________, we need to do sports. 为了学习好, 我们需要做体育运动。 4. 现在分词短语
In this picture, a mother bird stays in her nest in a big tree, _____________________ 在这幅图中, 一个鸟妈妈呆在一棵大树的鸟巢里, 观看她的鸟仔飞走。 5. 过去分词短语
__________________________________, mobile phones and the Internet are faster and much more convenient. 与信件和公用电话相比, 手机和网络更快也更方便。 6. 介词短语
______________________________, he encourages us to think by ourselves. 他鼓励我们独立思考, 而不是马上告诉我们答案。(instead of的使用)
[即时练习] 按括号中的提示翻译下列句子。 1. 我是李华, 四川的一个学生。(同位语) I’m Li Hua,_______________. 2. 与其他老师相比, 摩尔先生更注意教学方法。(用过去分词短语)
__________________________, Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching. 3. 北京动物园, 建于1906年, 有100多年的历史了。(用过去分词短语) The Beijing Zoo, _____________, has a history of more than 100 years. 4. 李华在公共汽车站等601公车上去学。(现在分词短语)
. Li Hua was at the bus stop, _______________________________. 5. 我们学生应当通过努力学习而不是考试作弊来获得好成绩。(介词短语)
We students should try to get good results by studying hard ____________________________. 6. 合并句子:
⑴ The moon travels round the earth once every month.
⑵ The moon is a natural satellite of the earth.(现在分词短语)
_______________________________________________________________________________ 7. 合并句子：
⑴ He was well known for his expert advice.
⑵ He was able to help a great number of people with their personal affairs.(过去分词短语) ______________________________________________________________________________
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写作训练二
句子润色---用高级结构让整个句子靓起来
利用以下各招可给句子润色, 让句子靓起来。 1. 使用强调句
用do, does, did强调一般时态的谓语动词; 用it is ...that ...强调谓语之外的各种句子成分。 _________________________that her father recognized her. 直到她摘下眼镜她父亲才认出她。 2. 使用倒装句。
________________________learn English well. 只有用这种方法我们才可以学好英语。 3. 使用with的复合结构。如：
___________________, I couldn’t go on studying. 由于那噪音的持续, 我无法继续学习。 4. 使用非谓语动词。
_________________at the southwest corner of our school, the botanical garden has an area of 1000 square metres. 校园西南角/面积1000平方米。 5. 恰当使用被动句。
Above all, something ________to stop polluting. 最重要的是, 必须釆取某些措施来阻止污染。 6. 使用各类从句, 如使用“介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句。
There’re many kinds of tea in China,_________ _____Longjing Tea is famous all over the world. 中国的茶叶有很多种, 其中龙井茶是世界著名的。 7. “数词+名词”改用“as many as+数词+名词”。
A great number of buildings were destroyed, leaving ___________10, 000, 000 people homeless. 请多房屋被摧毁, 使多达千万的人失去家园。 介词短语与with结构强化训练
根据汉语提示完成英文句子, 或用所给词的适合形式填空。
1. We are sure that everything will be better _______________________(随着时间的推移). 2. _________________________ (一到达), we began to work immediately.
3. ___________________(做完那些工作之后), we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees, and _______________(在离开之前), we took some photos to record our green action. 4. ___________________________(在比赛的过程中), you should finish your speech in five minutes and try your best to express yourself in English fluently.
5. ___________________(一听到铃声), students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could. 6.____________________________(随着科学和技术的发展), the world is changing every day. 7. ______________________________(所有的事都做完之后), they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people. [用独立主格结构]
8.__________________ _________________ (由于那噪音的持续), I couldn’t go on studying. [with的复合结构]
9.____________________________ (随着社会的快速发展), it’s quite necessary that we (should) have a good knowledge of English and computer.
写作训练三
句子润色——非谓语动词短语和强调结构专练
根据汉语提示完成英文句子, 或用所给词的适合形式填空。 用非谓语动词短语
1. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees,___________________________ (一路上有说有笑).
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2. At about 1 o-clock this afternoon， Tracy called, ___________________________________[说他明天上午不能在咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)同你见面] as she has something important to attend to. 3. _________________________________(参加英语演讲比赛)is a helpful way to learn English. 4. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries ______________________________________(是为了确定我们没有卷入任何麻烦事).
5. ____________________(被他的话所感动), I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing __________________________(名叫“母亲”的一首歌) for the students. 用强调结构或倒装句式
6. ____________________________(直到19世纪末??才) shooting earned its status as a sport. 7. We should be thankful to our parents _____________________________________(因为是他们把我们带到这个世界).
8. Everyone knows that we are busy all day. Seldom __________________________________(我们知道国内外正在发生什么).
9.__________________________(只有用这种方法我才能)gain more confidence. [用倒装句式] 10._________________________ (只因为他有病了)did he not come to school. 11.________________________ (只有那时, 我才认识到)that I had been wrong. it句型
根据中文提示完成下列句子。
12. For the two reasons mentioned above, ___________________(??就不足为奇了)I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.
13. As I am away from my parents, __________________(对我来说有必学会)to live on my own. 14. _________________________(众所周知) some students cheat in examinations at school. 15. As we haven’ t mastered enough English words, sometimes we may _________________ (觉得困难) to follow the teacher.
16. I think ________________________________________ (在考试中作弊是错误的)because it breaks the rules of school.
写作训练四
句子润色——简单句合并成复合句
有时为了使句子的连贯性更强, 表达也更为贴切、自然, 我们在两个或者多个简单句之间加上and, but, or(或者, 否则), for (因为), while(而, 却), when(就在这个时候), not only ...but also等并列连词, 使其成为并列复合句。如：
⑴ Our outdoor activity will last three hours. We’ll be back at about 11 o’clock →Our outdoor activity will last three hours and we’ll be back at about 11 o’clock.
⑵ You must hurry. You’ll miss the plane. →You must hurry or you’ll miss the plane. ⑶ Honey is sweet. The bee stings. →Honey is sweet but the bee stings.
在两个或者多个简单句之间加上when, after, as, because, where, which, who等从属连词, 可以使简单句变成复合句。如：
⑴ We will organize all kinds of activities in our English club. We can not only practise but also learn more English in the activities.(改为含定语从句的复合句) →
⑵ He missed the first bus. He came to school late.(改为含状语从句的复合句) →
即时练习
将下列各组句子合并成并列复合句或主从复合句。
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1. He was tired. He went to bed.
______________________________________________________________________________ 2. Our teacher must be at home. The door is open.
______________________________________________________________________________ 3. ⑴ A satellite is an object.
⑵ A satellite travels in an orbit round another object in space. ⑶ A satellite is either natural or man-made.
_______________________________________________________________________________ 4. ⑴ We high school students do have some growing pains. ⑵ We can get rid of them correctly and wisely.
_______________________________________________________________________________ 5. ⑴ There was once a famous detective. ⑵ He was named Sherlock Holmes.
⑶ He lived in London. ⑷ The time was at the end of the nineteenth century. _______________________________________________________________________________ 6. ⑴ The other day we had an English speech contest. ⑵ I won the first prize in the contest.
_______________________________________________________________________________ 7. ⑴ 79.3％ of the surveyed citizens say that their main motivation is to help their parents to live a better life.
⑵ 67.7％ claim that they work hard in order to change their own fate.
_______________________________________________________________________________ 8. We must study hard. Knowledge is power.
_______________________________________________________________________________ 9. ⑴ Students can improve their writing ability in this way. ⑵ They can strengthen their self-confidence.
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写作训练五
强化训练：并列复合句和主从复合句专练
并列复合句 用适当的并列连词填空。
1. Work hard , _________you will fail. 2. Work hard, ____ you will get good grades.
3. I worked hard at English and devoted all my spare time to practicing English， _____I failed to pass the mid-term examination.
4. About 9: 00 last night, I was busy preparing for my tomorrow’s test _____ suddenly loud noises came into my room.
5. Half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, __________ 48% of the boys favor sports stars.
6. However sometimes when you meet some difficulties, when you quarrel with others ________ when you fail in doing something, you may have a bad mood.
7. Next Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, _____all are welcome.
主从复合句 根据汉语提示完成英语句子。
8.I have taken with me ______________ ___________________________________________(你
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