托福写作模仿也能出高分

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原文：But this is not a business that can be undertaken in a day or swiftly improvised by a mere command of the will. The growth of alternative mental interests is a long process. The seeds must be carefully chosen; they must fall on good ground; they must be sedulously tended, if the vivifying fruits are to be at hand when needed. 模仿点：整个段落。

仿写：1). Befriending someone is not a business that can be undertaken in a day or swiftly improvised by an impulse of motion. The growth of friendship with an individual is a long process. The seeds must be carefully chosen; they must fall on good ground; they must be sedulously tended, if the vivifying fruits are to be at hand when needed. (友谊)

2). To succeed is not a business that can be undertaken in a day or swiftly improvised by an impulse of motion. The growth of a success in an alternative field is a long process. The seeds must be carefully chosen; they must fall on good ground; they must be sedulously tended, if the vivifying fruits are to be at hand when needed. (成功)

3). Environment protection is not a business that can be undertaken in a day or swiftly handled by a single person, which is a long process and must be sedulously and seriously tended. (环保) 例4：

原文：And if this something else is rightly chosen, if it is really attended by the illumination of another field of interest, gradually, and often quite swiftly, the old undue grip relaxes and the process of recuperation and repair begins.

模仿点：并列副词： ..., gradually, and often quite swiftly, ...

仿写：1). And if the subject is rightly chosen, if it is really attended by the illumination of a field of interest, gradually, and often quite swiftly, learning process begins and achievement in this subject will emerge. (兴趣、学科)

2). Social skills is of first importance to such jobs as a salesperson or a marketing manager, equipped with which new employees can, gradually, and often quite swiftly, blend into the new working environment and make great progress in shorter time. (社交)

综上，不管是简单的一个短语或者词汇，还是一个长的句式或者结构，我们都可以进行模仿，甚至，如果发现有些句式或者段落跟我们写作的话题相关时，还可以直接用在写作当中。不管你是写作菜鸟还是写作高手，模仿对于写作的不同阶段都有积极的促进作用——菜鸟学会怎么去写，高手学会怎么去写得更好。一句话，Without imitation, hardly can an individual achieve success.

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