艺考生课程 - 作文第七十二讲

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3. 假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter给你发来Email寻求帮助。请根据以下内容、写作要点和要求回信。 Dear Li Hua,

My mom and dad have a rule for their kids: You get all A’s in your exams or you’re out. I’m only 18, I do my homework and try my best, but I feel the pressure from them and I worry about what it’s doing to me. I wonder what it is like in your family. What should I do?

Yours,

Peter 写作要点：

1. 告诉Peter你家的情况；

2. 给Peter提出解决问题的具体建议。

要求：

1. 短文须写在答题卡指定区域； 2. 短文字数不少于100词（不含写好的部分）； 3. 内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯；4. 书写清晰、工整。 Dear Peter,

I’m surprised this kind of thing should happen in your country… ____________________________________________________________

【答案】What matters most in judging whether a man does well in his exam is not from the result only, from which we can see that the more attention your parents pay to the content of the paper, the more proper your improvement will be, so I strongly suggest that you have a heart to heart talk with your parents..

【解析】本题考查学生判断并寻找合适句子的能力，以原文的要求为出发点，寻找合适的句子和句式，同时结合汉语逻辑，这样就能写出符合文章需要的句子，并给文章增色。