（精品）2018年中考英语试题分项版解析汇编第02期专题13书面表达含解析 doc

shape and size. It's pleasant to see how busy they are always, But drones don't work. They are driven from the hive to be stopped from eating the honey before winter comes. Children shouldn't touch bees because they have sharp stings(刺) to harm them and protect themselves. No pains, no gains. Shouldn't children be as busy learning all their subjects as bees are busy gathering honey?

11.【2018年上海市中考】Write at least 60 words on the topic\以“进步了”为题,写一信不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)

你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少进步,比如生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习慣的养成。请选取其中一个方面,结合自身经历,谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的。 （注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。） The following is for reference only(以下表达仅供参考) used to do/be… try my best to do… make progress in( doing.…

【答案】I used to write badly, especially in English. It affected my performance every composition. I felt annoyed because I didn’t know how to do it.

Several months ago, our English teacher reminded us to pay attention to our English Writing. He prepared a copybook for each student. We were asked to practice every day. I tried my best to copy well. The teacher encouraged me and kept on telling me what to do next. With the help of my English teacher, I made progress in writing. No pains no gains. I will study hard to achieve greater progress and I believe I will do better and better.

【解析】作文要求以“My progress”为题，叙述自己一次进步的过程。故取得怎样进步是描

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述的重点，以前怎样，以后怎样也需要简单叙述。时态以一般过去时为主，人称为第一人陈。可以借鉴所提供的词组，另外，写作时还需注意语句间的衔接，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

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