2014高考英语短文改错抓分练习(11)

on which one looks forward to the new year and it’s also a period of time how people think about the

in when past year.

Now can you share with us the stories about∧ rest of the months? The

Born in Oct. 28, 1955, Bill Gates grew up in Seattle with his two sisters. Bill Gates attended public elementary school or the private Lakeside School, there he discovered his interest in software and begin programming computers at age 13. In 1973, Gates entered into Harvard University as a freshman. In her junior year, Gates left Harvard to devote himself to develop Microsoft, guiding by a belief that the computer would be a tool of great valuable on every office desktop. He proved to be success in the IT field.

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Born in Oct. 28, 1955, Bill Gates grew up in Seattle with his two sisters. Bill Gates attended public on

elementary school or the private Lakeside School, there he discovered his interest in software and begin

and where began

programming computers at age 13. In 1973, Gates entered into Harvard University as a freshman. In her junior

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year, Gates left Harvard to devote himself to develop Microsoft, guiding by a belief that the computer would

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be a tool of great valuable on every office desktop. He proved to be ∧success in the IT field.

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第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Nowadays, some students would not like to living in a dorm.Instead, they rented houses outside the school.There are advantages for all.Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation among classmates, but of course it is safe.A dorm is more like a society, where enables students to learn to get along with the each other, thus preparing for the social life later.As for renting a house to live in alone, it's better for your studies as you can feel freely in your own room without interrupted by others.As a result, you will have more time and can devote yourself to studying whole-heart.But there may appear a few safety problem as you live outside the school.Anyhow as a student, I prefer living in a dorm.

参考答案------短文改错

Nowadays, some students would not like to living in a dorm.Instead, they rented

liverenthouses outside the school.There are advantages for all.Living in a dorm can increase

both

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friendship and cooperation among classmates, but of course it is safe.A dorm is more

andlike a society, where enables students to learn to get along with the\\' each other,

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whole-heartedlyproblemsoutside the school.Anyhow as a student, I prefer living in a dorm.

第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It was raining hardly outside, that made it difficult for me to go home for lunch.Just as I was wondering what I should eat at noon, I saw a familiar figure passed by our classroom.I rushed out and it was my mother, who is already in the fifties, that brought me lunch, regardless the heavy rain.In China, many parents make great sacrifices for our children.But what had the children done in return？All too often, most children just take it for granted that their parents should serve for them unconditionally.My dear mum or dad, thank you very much for bringing me up.How shall I do for you?

参考答案---短文改错

It was raining hardly outside, that made it difficult for me to go home for

hardwhichlunch.Just as I was wondering what I should eat at noon, I saw a familiar figure passed by our classroom.I rushed out and it was my mother, who is already in the

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fifties, that brought me lunch, regardless ∧ the heavy rain.In China, many parents

ofmake great sacrifices for our children.But what had the children done in return？

theirhaveAll too often, most children just take it for granted that their parents should serve for them unconditionally.My dear mum or dad, thank you very much for bringing me

andup. How shall I do for you?

What

第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time.My reasons are as follows：Firstly of all, it is good manners to helping others, especially in modern society.We needed others' help in case of we get into trouble.Secondly, we can able to improve ourselves by helping others because we can gain value experience and build up our confidence while serving others.What's more, volunteering make us feel better about ourselves, thus making their life more enjoyable.More important, we can make the world a better place to live in by volunteering.In a word, volunteering can make difference to our life, and I think it is very rewarding to be a volunteer.

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I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time.My reasons are as follows：Firstly

Firstof all, it is good manners to helping others, especially in modern society.We needed

helpneedothers' help in case of\\'we get into trouble.Secondly, we can able to improve

areourselves by helping others because we can gain value experience and build up our

valuable

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