高考英语大二轮复习冲刺经典专题语法部分专题二短文改错第3讲篇法类教学案

第3讲 篇法类

篇法类错误也就是行文逻辑类错误相对来说并不是很难，但考生要从整体入手，放眼全篇，它可能从单句来看在语法上并没有错误，但放入特定语境则不正确，一般来说我们可以从上下文、惯用法、主从句及语意语境等方面去着手，我们建议在解题流程的第3步去解决此类错误。

考点1 指代类错误

1．(2019·全国卷Ⅰ) ... I started to play my football with classmates after school.

答案 去掉my

2．(2018·全国卷Ⅲ)I had done myself homework, but I was shy. 答案 myself→my

3．(2016·全国卷Ⅱ)If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledge we cannot get from books.

答案 your→our

4．(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Mr and Mrs Zhang all work in our school. 答案 all→both

5．(2016·全国卷Ⅱ)It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot. 答案 many→much

6．(2015·浙江高考)Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.

答案 them→it

对于代词类错误一是要关注上下句或上下文，看指代对象、代词性别、

代词的单复数、代词的格等是否逻辑一致，代词与反身代词、名词性物主代词和形容词性物主代词是否混淆；二是要熟知常见的不定代词的区别，如some与any，many与much，either与neither等。

考点2 逻辑关系类错误

1．(2019·全国卷Ⅰ)Suddenly a football fell just in front of me but almost hit

me.

答案 but→and

2．(2018·全国卷Ⅲ)Everyone was silent, waiting to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud.

答案 and→or

3．(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor's orders, so once I started the car, my mind went back.

答案 so→but/yet

4．(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. 答案 去掉but

5．(2015·陕西高考)My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.

答案 after→when/while

对于连词类错误考生一方面要在熟悉常见连词用法的基础上去看上

下文的语境，另一方面要知晓连词的考查类型：①删除：如，because或since与so连用时，删除so；though/although/as与but连用时，删除but；②误用：如，or与and，and与but，so与but，before与after，before/after与when/while等。

考点3 情境类错误

1．(2019·全国卷Ⅱ)I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much.

答案 too→very/so

2．(2019·全国卷Ⅰ)I became ... One afternoon ... From now on, I started to ... 答案 now→then

对于情境类错误，考生一定要放眼全局，从特定语境和语篇情感入手，

尤其注意固定词语中体现时间和情感的副词。

过关检测(限时：20分钟)

(2019·贵州模拟)Life is full of various experiences, some of them are unforgettable. I still remember the hiking experiences with my classmates for 16 km a year later. That summer day, we set off early in the morning, think it would be great fun to walk for so long a distance. However, with the weather is getting hotter and hotter, I found their legs heavier and heavier. What's worse, my feet began bleeding because long time pressing against the shoes. At one point, I even wanted to give up. But I manage to drag the rest of the way to the destination. Though not pleasant, this journey was impressive or rewarding. I have learnt that life is a long journey like this. No matter what happened, we should never give up.

答案：

Life is full of various experiences, some of them are unforgettable. I still

①which

remember the hiking experiences with my classmates for 16 km a year later. That summer

②experience

③ago

day, we set off early in the morning, think it would be great fun to walk for so long

④thinking

a distance. However, with the weather is＼ getting hotter and hotter, I found their

⑤

⑥my

legs heavier and heavier. What's worse, my feet began bleeding because ∧ long time

⑦of

pressing against the shoes. At one point, I even wanted to give up. But I manage to

⑧managed

drag the rest of the way to the destination. Though not pleasant, this journey was impressive or rewarding. I have learnt that life is a long journey like this. No

⑨and

matter what happened， we should never give up.

⑩happens

(2019·洛阳一模)In my spare time, I often read some books written by famous writers in or abroad. I ever read China's Four Great Classical novel such as Journey

to the West. Beside, I enjoy reading Tang poetry.

I have been writing from I was nine years old. I am remember the first time my parents and I talked about my dream of becoming writer. They laughed happy when they read the short story I write about robots. They think that my story is well worth

read and that I am good at writing. I believe I will achieve their dream.

答案：

In my spare time, I often read some books written by famous writers in or abroad.

①and

I ever read China's Four Great Classical novel such as Journey to the West. Beside，

②novels

③Besides

I enjoy reading Tang poetry.

I have been writing from I was nine years old. I am＼ remember the first time my

④since

⑤

parents and I talked about my dream of becoming∧ writer. They laughed happy when

⑥a

⑦happily

they read the short story I write about robots. They think that my story is well worth

⑧wrote

read and that I am good at writing. I believe I will achieve their dream.

⑨reading

⑩my

强化特训2 短文改错(三)(限时：30分钟)

[1]

(2019·太原模拟)Chinese is one of the world's most widely spoken languages. There are much different types of Chinese. For example, one type known as Mandarin, had almost a billion speakers. Outside of China, Chinese in some form is spoken Chinese communities worldwide. The different kinds of Chinese language use a same script. While someone from the north of China may need the speech of someone from the south interpreted, but it is not usually necessary to have written documents translating. In the early twenty century, a government language policy created Modern Standard Chinese, that is now the official language of China. It is one of the official language of the United Nations to develop more effectively communication.

答案：

Chinese is one of the world's most widely spoken languages. There are much

①many

different types of Chinese. For example, one type known as Mandarin, had almost a

②has

billion speakers. Outside of China, Chinese in some form is spoken ∧ Chinese

③by

communities worldwide. The different kinds of Chinese language use a same script.

④the

While someone from the north of China may need the speech of someone from the south interpreted, but＼ it is not usually necessary to have written documents translating.

⑤

⑥translated