大学英语四级作文批改常见错误归纳 - 图文

9．情态动词的误用

It may not good to our health. （误）

It may be not good to our health. （正）

They should spent much time. （误）

They should spend much time. （正）

10. There be句型的误用

There exists some new problems such as being dishonest. （误）

There exist/arise some new problems such as being dishonest. （正）

There are many way to solve the tuition and fees of college education. （误）

There are many ways to raise the money for the tuition and fees for college education. （正）

1.动宾搭配不当

We must pay attention to it and make solutions to the problem. （误）

We must pay attention and find a solution to the problem. （正）

It also may help you to make success. （误）

It may also help you succeed/obtain your goal. （正）

2.根据中文逐字硬译

If someone's family situation is not well, he can apply for loan to bank. （误）

If one's family is not well off, he can apply to the bank for a loan. （正）

Let alone touch the outside world of campus/keep a good body health（误）

Let alone get in touch with the world outside of the campus/keep fit（正）

比较级：

1. As the economy of China is becoming more and more faster. 改：去掉more and more

2. In China fast food is popular as well as Chinese food. … fast food is as popular as Chinese food.

3. Sometimes, they have no more time to make food themselves. 改more 为much

4. Because health is everything. 5. There is no time reading books. 6. Nothing can instead of reading. 7. The Comma Fault

8. Faulty: It was raining hard, they could not work in the field. Correct: It was raining hard; they could… 1. It was raining hard. They could... 2. It was raining so hard that they…

9. It was raining hard, so they could… 10. As it was raining hard, they could… 11. Inverted Sentence

12. 1. His glasses, a dictionary, books and notes lay on the desk.

13. On the desk lay his glasses, … .

14. Confusion in voice, and tense 语态、时态 15. The number is fallen(fell) down to 51.7% and 48.7% in 2003 and 2005, respectively. 16. Word Order

17. 1. Beijing Uni. has many well-known profs. at home and abroad.

18. Beijing Uni. has many profs. well-known at home and abroad.

19. 2. One day, I and my classmates went to …

2. We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very capable lady.

II. Dangling (悬垂分词)

1. Looking out of the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach.

2. Though seriously ill, the boss made her work.

Part Two The sentence

I. Parallel constructions 平行结构 Faulty parallelism:

1. They would spend time making money rather than read.