A2011高考英语书面表达专题及范文 - 图文

2011高考英语书面表达专题复习范文

高考书面表达的写作方法与技巧

高考的书面表达写作时，应抓住以下四个要点：

(一)认真审题（Carefully read the directions.）明确要求。审题是做好书面表达的前提，做题 前应先认真阅读提示/题示，理解和明确题目要求，审题时主要从这么几个方面入手。 ①审文体：弄清要写何种体裁的文章，如记叙文、说明文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、便条） 等。以及该用什么时态。

②审格式：书面表达中一定的体裁有特定的格式，比如书信有信头、称呼、正文、结尾、署名 等部分须写完整。

③审人称：即弄清书面表达要求用何种人称来写，是第一人称、第二人称、还是第三人称。如 98年的书面表达要求用第一人称来写日记，可是有的考生用第三人称写，结果扣了分。 (二)抓住要点（Mainly catch the points.）紧扣主题。是书面表达的评分依据之一，因此，在弄 清题意的基础上，应逐条地、完整地将内容要点写全，必要时在紧扣主题时可适当发挥。 (三)合理组织（Closely organize the passage.）行文连贯。写作中要点要写全，合理安排，分清文章的层次，弄清先说什么，后说什么，并使之连贯，过渡要自然，注意使用恰当的连接成分。

(四)准确表达（Accurately express the ideas），遣词造句。一篇好的书面表达应做到开门见山，切中题意，文章结尾应起到画龙点睛的作用，文章内容的表达要甄酌用词，做到表达准确。 写作中应避免用一种句型显得单调，注意前几句和后几句，文章要有亮点， 可以套用阅读理解短文中的好句子。 误点警示：

英语书面表达中容易出现的问题：

① 将提示逐条翻译，出现中国式的英语（Chinese English /Chinglish） ② 句子结构、逻辑错误，时态错误。

③ 该详的不详，该略的不略（即详略不当）

总之，英语书面表能力的提高需要一个较长的学习过程，在长期坚持练习的同时， 还必须多读多看，多模仿才行。正如英语的这句谚语“Rome was not built in a day.”

如2003年的全国高考书面表达题：

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请 你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面 积为25平方米，月租500元。（见下图）

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注意：1．词数：100左右。2．参考词汇：房租—rent(n .)。

本题的要点是①开头②公寓（一室带浴室、厨房）③面积家具（25平方米、床、 沙发、书桌、椅子）④公寓位置（芳草街、离学校一站）⑤月租费500元⑥结尾。 Dear Bob,

I?m so glad to learn that you?re coming in September. I?ve found a place for you. It?s a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. The flat is in a building on Fangchao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No. 11 can take you straight to the school. In fact, it?s only one stop. Do you think you?d like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua 一． 应用文 A． 通知

(1)书面通知格式示例

NOTICE

In order to arouse the students? interest in learning English, the Student Union has decided to set up an English Club with the help of the teachers of English.

___________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ Student Union November 9, 2004

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(2)口头通知格式示例 Boys and girls,

May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.

The Students? Union is going to hold a party on Sunday evening, November 12th, to welcome our friends from the United States.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ That?s all . Thank you!

1. 假如你是旅行社导游，在高考以后，组织学生参加上海世博会(the World Expo)。根据下表内容，写一个口头通知，将行程安排通知游客。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 出发时间 交通方式 参观内容 返回时间 注意：

1.不要逐条翻译。 2.可适当增加细节，以使文章连贯。

3.词数不少于100。 4参考词汇：展馆 pavilion Dear Friends, May I have your attention, please? Here is our travel plan. We will meet in the front square of the railway station at 6:30 in the morning for the 7:00 train to Shanghai, which will cover the distance within 4 hours at a speed of 275km/h. After a simple lunch, we will go to visit the Chinese Pavilion, where we will see the best from different places of China. On the second day, we will visit 4 foreign pavilions, two in the morning and two in the afternoon, where we will experience the diverse foreign cultures by ourselves. We will take the night train back home and we will arrive home at about 11:30 at night. That?s all. Thank you. B．书信（2010年高考英语书面表达预测） 书信格式示例 ：

25 Tianshui Road Lanzhou, China January 3rd, 2003 208 Hope Road Sydney, Australia Dear Laura,

How are you getting on now?_____________________________________________________

6月16日上午6:30分在火车站前广场集合，7:00乘车 乘火车，时速275km/h，用时4小时 当天下午 第二天 中国馆，可以领略各省市的精华 四个外国展馆，上午两个，下午两个，可以近距离体验外国文化 乘夜车返回，到家时间约晚上11:30分 3

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,

Zhou Lan

1.假设你是李华,你的加拿大朋友Michael 十年前来过你的家乡。现在远方的他写信给你想了解你们家乡的变化。请根据以下提示给Michael 回一封电子邮件。

过去 生活条件差,道路狭窄,车辆少,住不好,吃不饱,联系简单、慢。 现在 生活条件优越,道路宽,车辆多,住的舒适,手机普及。 要求：1．围绕以上内容进行合理表述； 2．所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面；

3．词数80词左右, 开头语已给出 （不计入词数）。 One possible version: Dear Michael, You want to know the changes about my hometown．You know, great changes have taken placed since 60 years ago． In the past, the living conditions were very poor．There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow．Usually, a big family was crowded into a small, dark house．Most families couldn?t get enough food．The communications were simple and slow．People kept in touch with others far away mainly by letter or telegram．

Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recently years．The living conditions are much better and more comfortable．The roads are wide．Some people have their own cars．Most of the people have lived in big new houses．Quite a few adults have mobile phones．Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better．

Sincerely Yours,

Li Hua

2. 请你以A Worried Mother的名义给中国教育报写一封信，反映如下情况： 1. 很多电视节目充满了暴力，儿童常常模仿；

2. 不能用儿童来做广告，这样不利于孩子们的成长；

3. 一些儿童看了电视里的广告后，要求他们的父母只购买广告里的糖果、玩具等之类的商品； 4. 不能把一些著名的儿歌改变成广告词。 注意：

1. 信的开头已为你写好；2. 不能逐条翻译； 3. 词数100左右。 Dear Editor,

I?d like to tell you something about the effect of television. _____________________ 【参考答案一】 Dear Editor,

I?d like to tell you something about the effect of television. I?m sure that this is not the opinion of mine at all. When we open the TV, a lot of violence showings will appear on TV. I think this is not good for children, because many children will copy what they see.

Today, many children were asked to play the roles of advertisements, singing the songs varied from

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