专题05 短文改错（第07期）-2019届高三英语百所名校好题速递分项解析汇编 Word版含解析

【吉林省东北师大附中等2019届高三六校联考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Monday, I learned a lesson about tell lies. Early in the morning, I didn’t want to go to the school, but I pretended to feel ill. My mother was very worrying when I told her. She left quickly and I thought she has gone to work. But soon, she came back with a bottle of pill. She said that she had asked for a day off from work to look me. I felt a little guilty but I dared not tell the truth. That afternoon, my teacher came to visit me. I felt so regretfully for telling lies. Finally, I admitted I had lain and promised never to do them again. 【答案】1.tell改为telling 2.去掉the

3.but改为so或and 4.worrying改为worried 5.has改为had 6.pill改为pills 7.me前添加after 8.regretfully改为regretful 9.lain改为lied 10.them改为it或that 【解析】 【分析】

这是一篇记叙文。作者在本文讲述了自己一次撒谎的经历。由于不想去上学，作者假装生病，妈妈很担心并请假在家照顾作者，这使得作者有一种负罪感。下午老师来看望他时，作者最终承认犯了错误，并保证以后不会再撒谎了。

6.考查名词的数。句意\一瓶药丸\，pill是可数名词，要用复数形式pills。 7.考查介词。句意：她请了两天假照顾我，look after意为\照顾\，故添加after。 8.考查形容词。Feel为系动词，后跟形容词作表语，故改为regretful。

9.考查动词。lie在此处是“撒谎”的意思，做“撒谎”时，lie为规则动词，以不发音的e结尾末尾添加-d，故改为lied。

10.考查人称代词。句意：我发誓再也不这么做了。此处指上文中作者撒谎的这件事，为第三人称单数形式，故改为it或改为指示代词that。

【湖北省鄂州市2019届高三上学期期中】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(

)，并在其下面写出该加的词

删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Recently campus safety has become public concern since a series of violent attacks happen, which caused serious damage. It makes us aware of the fact that safety should always come firstly in our daily life.

In this case, we should take effective measure which can solve this problem. Firstly, our students should realize we must follow our school or traffic rules, and pay attention to food safety. Many incidents happen just because of we are too careless. Secondly, you should take training of security so that we can keep calm if faced with conflicts. Thirdly, our government and schools should provide surroundings in that our students can focus on acquiring knowledge. As far as I am concerned, improve campus safety is very important that we all should try our best to make everyone on campus safe and sound.

【答案】become后面加上a happen →happened firstly →first measure →measures or →and you →we that →which improve →improving very →so 【解析】 【分析】

这是一篇议论文。文章主要讲了如何采取有效措施，来保证校园安全。

第四处：考查名词单复数。句意：在这种情况下，我们应该采取有效的措施来解决这个问题。“有效的措施”是复数含义，用名词复数，所以measure →measures。

第五处：考查连词。句意：首先，我们的学生应该意识到我们必须遵守我们的学校和交通规则，并且注意食品安全。文中表示并列关系，所以or →and。

第六处：考查代词。句意：其次，我们应该接受安全培训，这样我们就可以在面对冲突时保持冷静。文中表示“我们应该……”，所以you →we。

第七处：考查介词+关系代词引导的定语从句。这里含有一个介词+关系代词引导的定语从句，指物，只能用which，所以that →which。

第八处：考查动名词。句意：在我看来，改善校园安全是如此重要，以至于我们都应该尽我们最大的努力使每个人在校园安全和健康。作句子主语，用动名词，所以improve →improving。

【广东省华附、省实、广雅、深中2019届高三上学期期末联考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Oliver,

How are you? I’m writing to share an exciting news about my new family business. As you known, my town don’t have a sporting goods store. The close place to buy sports equipment is about 20 kilometer from here. My brother Mark and I will open a sporting goods store. It will have better customer service than the others stores, and our prices will be lower. Mark will be the store manager so he is good with people. I will be the advertising manager. We plan to open the store in May.

I hope you can come or visit our store soon! I look forward to hear from you soon.

Take care,

Lucy

【答案】第一处：去掉an 第二处：known改成know 第三处： don’t改成doesn’t 第四处： close改成closest