2019年中考英语真题 分类 专题21.3 书面表达(咨询建议类)(第02期)(解析版)

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Hello，everyone．We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable．What can we do for our hometown？（点题）In order to make our hometown more beautiful，as students，I think we should start from small things．【高分句型一】（从小事做起）First of all，we should know the importance of protecting the environment．We should plant more trees and flowers and not cut down trees randomly．Second，we had better reuse the bag when shopping．【高分句型二】We can't throw rubbish about，and we should keep the rivers clean and so on．In addition，we must obey public rules and be civilized students．When we got on the bus，we should wait in line．（具体做法） 【名师点评】

能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

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In order to make our hometown more beautiful， as students， I think we should start from small things．为了使我们的家乡更美丽，作为学生，我认为我们应该从小事开始。

in order to do sth为了做某事；I think+宾语从句。 【高分句型二】

Second， we had better reuse the bag when shopping．第二，我们最好重用当购物袋。 had better do sth 最好做某事。

（四）【2019 ?湖南省益阳市】

最近，你美国的笔友Tony在与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼，他写邮件向你寻求帮助。请你以李华的身份给他写一封邮件——提出你的一些建议。

建议内容包括：遇到问题多倾诉，多与他人分享情绪，尊重他人，与人为善，诚实守信…… 要求：l．词数60-80，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

3．文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。

参考词汇：share solve respect friendly be honest to Dear Tony,

I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates: I'm glad to help you. ________________________

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I hope everything will go well with you soon.

Yours, Li Hua

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本文的写作要求是一封电子邮件。首先，对于朋友在交友过程中遇到难题表示歉意。用情态动词提建议，最后希望能交到跟多朋友。然后，分步骤给出另外四个建议处理和同学们的关系。最后希望一切会好起来。 【参考范文】 Dear Tony,

I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates. I'm glad to help you. Here are some suggestions for you.

First, when you have difficulties, you should talk to your parents, your teachers or your friends and share your sadness and happiness with them. They will help you solve the problem.

Second, when you get along with your friends, you are supposed to respect them. Third, you should be friendly to people around you. You can help each other.

Last but not least, you have to be honest to your friends. Then you will make more friends. I hope everything will go well with you soon.

Yours, Li Hua

【名师点评】

本文对于在和同学们交往中遇到的问题提出建议，分四步给出合理建议，最后指出对朋友要诚实，并希望能够交到更多朋友。用到的短语有：share sth. with sb.；get along with和……相处；be supposed to do应该做某事和Last but not least等，使得文章丰富多彩；长短句搭配合理。

（五）【2019 ?贵州省黔南州】

每年的6月6日是我国的\爱眼日\，可见保护中小学生的视力非常重要，为此，学校将在英语文化节期间举行一场\爱眼日\英语演讲比赛．请你写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈你对保护视力重要性的认识和建议．

内容：1．保护视力的重要性（请写1点） 2．对保护视力的建议： （1）阅读时注意用眼卫生； （2）少用电子产品； （3）常看绿色植物； （4）做眼保健操； （5）多做户外运动．

要求：1．结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰； 2．文中不得出现任何真实的人名，学校名等信息； 3．词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：Sight Day \爱眼日\； electronic products 电子产品； eye-protecting exercises 眼保健操 Dear friends,

June 6 is our country's Sight Day

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Thank you! 【参考范文】 Dear friends,

June 6 is our country's Sight Day. As we know, \are the windows of the soul\Everyone understands the importance of the eyes.（保护视力的重要性）But now more and more students are getting near-sighted. So how can we protect our eyes? Here is some advice on how to protect our eyes.

First, we should be cautious on the health of using eyes. We should not keep your eyes working for a long time. While reading, we should keep the book about a foot away from us. After reading for an hour or two, we had better have a rest by looking at the plants in the distance. Second, using less electronic products is a good way to protect our eyes.【高分句型一】 Besides, we should see green plants as often as possible. Finally, remember to do eye-protecting exercises or do more outdoor sports, which will help us keep good eyesight.【高分句型二】 （对保护视力的几条建议）

（六）【2019 ?吉林省】

假如你是李华，想参加China Daily 举办的以\梦想职业体验\为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请给主办人Mr. Smith写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。

内容包括：1. 个人信息与兴趣爱好； 2. 梦想职业与个人计划。

写作要求：1. 词数90词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。 Dear Mr. Smith,

It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you.

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I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply． Best wishes!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

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