初二仁爱英语作文 书面表达 健康饮食

B. 书面表达

生活中，每个人或多或少都有过很多不利于健康的坏习惯，你是否曾经也有过这样的坏习惯？请就此写一篇80词左右的短文，内容包括：

1. 你自己有过什么坏习惯；

2. 这个坏习惯对健康有什么不利的影响； 3. 你是如何改掉这个坏习惯的。 【写作指导】

1. 审题：第一人称，一般过去时，记叙文。 2. 高分技巧：

① 写成三段文，合理使用过渡句；

② 使用逻辑关系词和比较级来体现习惯的影响和变化，如：first, later, at last, finally, and, but, as a result，because, so等。 【写作框架】

Do you have any bad habit? Today I’d like to tell you my story.（使用过渡句）

I used to_________________________________ (过去经常做的事/坏习惯 + 频次). _______________________________ (做这件事的感受). Because of ___________________, _________________________________________ (这个坏习惯对你的学习，生活等方面造成的不好的影响).

Later, I _____________________________ (做出的改变/行动). I started to ____________________ (好习惯养成). Gradually I _______________ (做出改变后收获的好的影响)._____________________________ (习惯纠正后的最终结果).

【作品呈现】

Do you have any bad habit? Today I’d like to tell you my story.

Do you have any bad habit? Today I’d like to tell you my story. I used to drink a lot of Cola, about two or three cans everyday. At meal time, I would say I was not hungry at all and didn’t want to eat. Because of the Cola I drank, I ate very little and got thinner and thinner and even had a stomachache often.

Later, I followed a doctor’s advice. I started to drink only water and have meals on time. Gradually I put on some weight. And I am a tall and strong boy now.