2020版高考英语二轮新考势突破检测：1-3-4 短文改错+即学即练+Word版含解析

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(2019年厦门外国语学校高三月考)

Last summer, I had a valuable experience working like a volunteer in the community hospital.I worked from July 15 to July 31, when elderly over 55 were given freely medical examinations.Every day I arrive early and organized the people who came over.Then I would help him fill in the forms.Lead them to the different departments was also one of my duty.Everyone there worked in a tight schedule.By the time their examinations were over, I was already bathing in sweat.Tired though I was, but I benefited a lot from the experience as I built up my confident and improved my communication skills.

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文章大意：这是一篇记叙文。文章介绍了作者在社区医院做志愿者的宝贵经历。

1．考查介词。本句中work as“作为……而工作”，like作介词讲时意为“像，如同”，故将like改为as。

2．考查冠词。冠词the加形容词表示一类人，the elderly意为“老年人，长者”，在此处作定语从句的主语成分，故在when后面加上the。

3．考查形容词。句意：55岁以上的老年人可以免费体检。此处修饰名词examinations，因此用形容词，故将freely改为free。

4．考查时态。文章作者的志愿工作发生在上个暑假，应用一般过去时，故将arrive改为arrived。

5．考查代词。前文提到“the people who came over”，本句“我”帮助的人是“他们”，此处应用人称代词的复数形式，故将him改为them。

6．考查动名词作主语。句意：带领他们到不同的部门也是我的职

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责之一。此处动名词形式作主语，故将Lead改为Leading。

7．考查名词。由本句“one of”可知，后加可数名词复数，表示“我”的众多职责之一。故将duty改为duties。

8．考查固定搭配。句意：我已经汗流浃背了。be bathed in“沐浴于，被……笼罩”。故将bathing改为bathed。

9．考查让步状语从句。Though/Although引导让步状语从句时，不与连词but连用。故将but去掉。

10．考查名词。句中build up one's confidence意为“树立某人信心”，放在形容词性物主代词my后，应用名词，故将confident改为confidence。

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(2019年广东省佛山市顺德区高三质量检测)

In order enrich students' school life, many schools offer all kind of after-school activities.I think that participated in after-school activities is beneficial to students.Therefore, every the student should take part in at most one after-school activity.That you choose is up to you.Any after-school activity that actual attracts you is OK, for example, a drama.After-school activities not only helps you relieve stress, and broaden your minds.Above all, they are good with character building through time management, teamwork and strong competition.

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文章大意：这是一篇议论文。讨论学校提供各种各样的课外活动以丰富学生的学校生活。

1．考查不定式符号。句意：为了丰富学生的学校生活，许多学校提供各种各样的课外活动。固定短语in order to“为了”后用动词的不定式，故添加to。

2．考查名词的数。kind为可数名词，由all修饰为复数概念，故用复数形式kinds。

3．考查非谓语动词。本句已经存在谓语动词，且句中没有连词，故用非谓语，且与逻辑主语构成主谓关系，故用现在分词participating。

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